enigmatic 504 Posted June 6, 2016 Share Posted June 6, 2016 Daniel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 8,941 Posted June 6, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted June 6, 2016 I think the canvas size is your biggest problem here; it kinda looks like you tried to squish everything you wanted into a tiny box instead of just making the box a bit bigger. Text takes up almost the entire canvas (small canvas, + big name = issue) which can work but doesn't really here. Lighting is okay but there almost seems to be a film grain over everything that's making it look LQ to me. Would like to see a bit more stock work or maybe a small splash of colour to make something pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CowboyinAmerica 2,841 Posted June 6, 2016 Share Posted June 6, 2016 Claimed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
701 309 Posted June 9, 2016 Share Posted June 9, 2016 Like Beketov has said, the canvas size could be bigger so everything fits better and doesn't seem crammed into a small space. Not sure how I feel about the BnW feel of this, but it isn't too much of a eye sore. I love your work though, and this just seems to be lacking a tad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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