Gunner 165 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Phil, JardyB10 and gorlab 3 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/33645-newfangled-digital-contraptions-12/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil 5,119 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Keep those PTs coming brah! Gunner 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/33645-newfangled-digital-contraptions-12/#findComment-372703 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DollarAndADream 3,356 Posted October 12, 2016 Share Posted October 12, 2016 On 2016-09-12 at 5:42 PM, Gunner said: Feedback: Love the effect over the BG, it really makes the render pop out. Maybe the render itself could use a little more effect to it, or be sharpened a little. I really like the text as well. Great work. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/33645-newfangled-digital-contraptions-12/#findComment-379282 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Molholt 2,185 Posted October 12, 2016 Share Posted October 12, 2016 The background is interesting. The render feels kinda slapped on the background, in that it doesn't really blend in at all and really stands out, probably too much. The text is interesting, although I'm not sure it really fits with everything else. I think everything just needs some cohesion here. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/33645-newfangled-digital-contraptions-12/#findComment-379381 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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