gregreg 930 Posted October 30, 2016 Share Posted October 30, 2016 Phil 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 8,944 Posted October 31, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted October 31, 2016 I like the idea behind this all but I feel like I can't see enough of it to really judge. The whole piece is far too dark, especially for the render and text being dark green. As strange as it sounds maybe invert the BG stocks so that the BG is mostly white instead of lack and you'd probably get a nice clean sig. Lighting is alright and text is great but the overall darkness is a major issue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho 917 Posted November 3, 2016 Share Posted November 3, 2016 Claimed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted November 13, 2016 Share Posted November 13, 2016 The sig is too dark and needs higher contrast imo. the light source is weak and could be brighter. I would put the text on the right side, it would match the flow imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.png.ed69a7260a477fcf4feead7a0e4b7506.png)
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now