Claimed: Mueller

[NotAVHLM-GM 1,858]

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For Warlock

Edited September 21, 2017 by Green

[Kesler 1,514]

On 9/21/2017 at 11:47 AM, Green said:

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For Warlock

After just recently grading a sig you made way back in July. I think this is improvement. The render placement is good, the text placement could have been a bit better, maybe placing part of over top fo the renders right arm so just down and to the right a bit. I dont think the render text really fits with the sig, maybe if you placed a red/blue texture or even the render it self and clipping masked it over the text it would have fit better. I am not a fan of the lined paper over top of everything, as it seems to take away from the quality of the render and makes it just a bit harder to see. Also could have used a light source. I hope this helped.