Claimed: Karlsson [2/2]

[Heracles 22]

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

If this is your first attempt, I think its a pretty good start!

Your BG has a parchment paper type look to it. Although I would've like to seen the left side incorporated all throughout the BG to give it uniformity in its look.

The player has nice bold colouring to it but I think the his head could be a little more sharper so there's more focus on his face.

I like the font style even though its plain but I don't agree with the color of it. Even though you can read the font, I think a lighter colour would be more suitable.

Its def a good attempt at a render!

[Quik 4,113]

 

Review: This has some real solid elements to it. The render is blended in, as is the text, and there's some solid stock work in there as well. The render is very dark, and some lighting to brighten up Kane's face would go a long way. I'm also not a huge fan of the black mould on the left of the sig, I think some more stocks to blend that out a bit, or just trying to cut it out entirely would give this a cleaner look. With the text, some effects like lighting would help it too, as right now it looks kind of flat. On the whole, real solid effort!