Green Quebec [2/2]

[bgreene21 60]

[STZ 5,360]

I expected more green

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

It has a b&w retro exposure which is decent.

I think the BG is kindve nice looking with the black font over the picture of the animal.

I'm not liking the harshness of the light exposure on his helmet, I think it should be more subtle.

Over all it looks pretty good but seems like it didn't take too long to make this render.

Nice lookin b&w sig!

[Quik 4,113]

 

Review: More like Brown Quebec, amirite? The left half of this is pretty solid, though the lighting is a bit too strong on the helmet, soften that up and it gets much cleaner. I also think a couple of stocks to blend everything together would be helpful, nothing heavy, just something to add a bit of depth. I can see what you're going with for the text, using the graffiti on the concrete wall, but the style is a bit off. It feels a bit squished, I think you could have totally stretched it out a bit more, and taken it off that plane and put it a bit more diagonal, so that it looks like legit graffiti, rather than a font you used. It's a decent sig, and has the elements to be great, keep at it!