Claimed: Boner Jamz '94 [1/2]

[STZ 4,510]

 

@Kendrick

Edited January 8, 2018 by STZ

[Kendrick 4,689]

Question though, did you ever watch Boner Jamz 95'? They went with a different actor

[STZ 4,510]

@Kendrick I updated the OP, the red was a little strong

[Kendrick 4,689]

29 minutes ago, STZ said:

@Kendrick I updated the OP, the red was a little strong

So was the red in 95'

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

The first thing I notice is that as a whole, the render seems rather dark which I think could be remedied by either more contrast between colours, a over all lighter color scheme or a combo of both.

The BG has a dark foreboding look to it and the pyramid style render around him is cool but too close to the player in shade.It needs more separation. I feel.

His face has a touch over saturation, but I always like that as it gives a comic book look to the player.

Your upper left light source is nice and subtle and matches what lights up the player.

Everything has a soft faded look to it but I think it would be better suited if either the BG or player had more sharpness to it to offset the other.

Your font style is kinda plain/dull and is hard to read due to it being faded at either end. A more clear and pronounced font would be aesthetically more.pleasing.

Over all a nice render but a little too dark and not enough colour contrast.