Claimed: Slipher [1/2]

[DollarAndADream 3,356]

@Hybrid1486

[Banackock 8,049]

Not too shabby. 6.1/10

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

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On 6/4/2018 at 7:28 AM, DollarAndADream said:

@Hybrid1486

 

Strong piece, I like a lot of what I'm seeing!  I like the radial blur effect, not sure if that was the way the stock was, or if you added it, but it's well placed with respect to the render.  I really like the text work, particularly with how it interacts with the render.  My main complaint is the stick... with nothing else in the foreground, the way that it's blurry is kind of jarring with the smooth/polished feel of the rest of it.  I also don't like the color of the tape (which is suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper nit-picky on my part ) but if you could have tried to bring it either to being closer to the white of his shoulders or the orange of some of the light spots... idk it just feel like it clashes atm.

 

On the whole, great work!