Jared N [2 TPE]

[jared 66]

As I was growing up I always liked hockey. I would always watch the sport. My family and I grew up panther fans and still to this day I am a die hard fan. Since watching all the time, I decided to start playing, and that decision was the best decision I have ever made. Throughout the years of playing all my coaches would always push me to be the very best player I can possibly be! Everyday from when I got out of school to around 10 o’clock I would just be practicing and training to be the top player in the league. With my parents, family, friends, and teammates practice everyday and working hard made it that much fun and it kept me motivated. Now that I’v signed with a VHLM team (SDM)I feel like I am in a dream and I have never been more happier. I never been on a better team and felt so included since I signed with the SD Marlins. I can’t wait to see where I go from here. I want to thank Everyone that has helped me to get to this point. 

[rjfryman 1,120]

He great start so far. Just a reminder of the guidelines you need 400 words to get the 5 TPE. 

[DollarAndADream 3,356]

On 11/22/2019 at 12:50 PM, jared said:

As I was growing up I always liked hockey. I would always watch the sport. My family and I grew up panther fans and still to this day I am a die hard fan. Since watching all the time, I decided to start playing, and that decision was the best decision I have ever made. Throughout the years of playing all my coaches would always push me to be the very best player I can possibly be! Everyday from when I got out of school to around 10 o’clock I would just be practicing and training to be the top player in the league. With my parents, family, friends, and teammates practice everyday and working hard made it that much fun and it kept me motivated. Now that I’v signed with a VHLM team (SDM)I feel like I am in a dream and I have never been more happier. I never been on a better team and felt so included since I signed with the SD Marlins. I can’t wait to see where I go from here. I want to thank Everyone that has helped me to get to this point. 

In order to earn the full TPE for this, refer to the guidelines.

 

Junior Review (Can be written at any point, but preferably when you're in the VHLM) - A review of your players career up to the point they join the VHLM/declare for their VHL draft. Must be 400 words minimum, worth 5 TPE.

 

Needs to be at least 400 words.

[DollarAndADream 3,356]

Review:

400 words w/ correct presenation = 5 TPE

 

Considering I've messaged you and you're okay with leaving it...

 

You have 192 words here. 192 is almost half of the requirement, and you have no title, pictures, etc so I'll give you 2 TPE for this.

 

Let me know if you want to edit it soon, as it's been flagged for reviewing for awhile now.

@jared