Sixersfan594

Content 3/3 - Hit the word count. To be fair, I believe we can most definitely contend for a championship and I look forward to winning plenty of games with you this season. To be fair I believe my player is not built to succeed in the VHLm with the 175 TPE restriction and that may hurt us down the road as more people get up there in TPE. Grammar 2/2 - Good enough VHLM a member = VHLM as a member Galeano I have not yet = I have not yet etc. of Galeano Both Coutzen and... both = only need one both, you can Coutzen and... are both, or Both Coutzen and ... Appearance 1/1 - Good Final 6/6

Content 3/3 - I'll give you full marks, but try to get over 500 words. I loved the detail involved to show the reader about how it happened and the dimension it adds to your player. Grammar 2/2 - Some smaller errors I left out. Possible. = Possibly. European Team = European Team, Appearance .75/1 - Sorry man, but it could use a title, which could also help your post count Overview 5.75/6 -

SHL'er -- well former

Overview: 5/5 - Good overall view of your player, I like the story line and the clean timeline for Galeano. Grammar: 3/3 - Very clean, had to reach for this one. At age 19 = At 19 years of age Presentation: 1/1 - Looks fine. Over 1000 Words? 1/1 yup Overall: 10/10

Overview: 2/2 -Got all of the basic information and clips barely over the 500 word count. Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Good job over 400 words, but I do not like how you barely went into detail on Reaction Time and Hand Speed. Grammar: 1.5/2 - Way too many commas, but I'll let you stay within the 2 point area since it is one of the first pieces you have written here. during every summer = every summer time, he = time. He and read the plays = and reads the plays shows, he = shows. He behind to his net = behind his net situations, he = situations. He Presentation: 1/1 - Good enough for me Overall: 7.5/8 Btw welcome, I'm Smirnov Light/Dymo Ranjan from the SHL

Overview: 2/2 - Good in this regard, height weight etc. are all listed. Good job. Pros & Cons: 3/3 - I like how you brought your player to life citing attitude as an issue for him. Also good job showing that he is a pass-first kind of guy. Lastly, good job hitting the word count! Grammar: 2/2 - Good job grammatically, nothing to stand out or diminish from the rookie profile. Presentation: 1/1 - Good, I like the coloring which went along with the team color at the top (as in Cologne, and Bratislava). Overall: 8/8

wtf r u doing bumping it. grading it rn though

THERE WE GO!

Stand beside your words DT, what's the big deal about your next player's name.

I'll simmer down once you stand by your words

I wanna make it official. You've been saying the Sixers are ass so if you believe so just agree.

Why you backing down? A name for a player is no big deal

Btw he called out all of Phillies sports

Take our bet, come on! I bet Sixers have more wins than the Sacramento Kings. Winner names the next player for the loser. Backstory: This started after I told DT that OKC will win a title after the Sixers do. After that he said the Sixers are ass and that the Kings would do better. I said the Sixers will make the playoffs cause the East sucks ass. And that is why we are betting. Take the bet!

4-2 Ottawa

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Player Name: Le'Sean Coutzen VHL Team: Riga Reign Cash you have: 4 M Purchase Name: Point Task Upgrade Cost of Purchase: 2 M Cash Left: 2 M

Fesler...

idk Rami told me to spam u

Stop blocking people.

thank you

Please add in for Moscow: Jace Hines Thanks

If you need help with the file I may be able to solve the issue.

Kessel to Pittsburgh.