Content: 2/3 Well, what the fuck do you expect when the GM is a Chelsea fan? Ofc there's going to be defensive boring games being played. I am shocked (sarcasm). Because you did not make this obvious link, I have deducted a point.
Grammar: 1/2 Some small things - that all add up to give your words less and less credit with each mistake you made...
- the marketing campaigns of VHLM teams is are not
- but with only 85 goals scored for, putting this puts them 5th in the league.
- the wWatchmen
- two-way
- and had has tremendous
Appearance: 0.5/1 Kinda boring, but I suppose that's fitting with the article's nature. You also randomly changed fonts mid-way through a paragraph so suck it.
Total: 3.5/6 <-- this rounds down to a 2, so you may just wanna go back to claiming welfare.