jRuutu 2,464 Posted July 30, 2015 Share Posted July 30, 2015 I´m sure some of you know that , I absolutely hate doing anything at night time. I don´t know what it is but the darkness makes me feel like a little girl. It feels like someone is watching me and just waiting that I make a mistake or let my guard down. Luckily I don´t have to usually do anything at night time since we pretty much go straight to the hotel after games. The big problem starts when we have a home game and after everything is done , we can just go to home and usually that happens when it´s dark outside. Well this whole thing started when I was just doing my thing and going home after tough home game. It was raining but I drove home so I did not get wet. I ran inside and when I was behind my front door, I could clearly hear someone talking inside my place! I knew nobody should not be there so I slowly opened the door and searched the place. Nothing , absolutely nothing. Nobody was in there. I did not leave the TV on or anything. The voices clearly came from my place. I of course freaked out and went straight into a hotel for that night. I can´t sleep in a place that might be haunted. Next morning I called a expert and he said that my place might be haunted. I just bought it and this was the first time I heard any voices. This could also mean I´m going crazy but I did not want to take any chances. I sold the place two weeks later. Since I´m a nice guy, I did not tell the new owners that the place might be haunted. I gave the new owners most of my furniture and clothes. Who knows, maybe the ghosts live in my furniture? Not willing to risk that. I only took my suit and shoes with me. I gave them nice little discount on the prize which should make up for it. There is no point in making all of us scrared All this gave me a valuable lesson. I need to get in touch with my spiritual side. Maybe all this just means that I need to let my body and soul heal? No idea what it means but I started to take yoga classes soon after. I don´t want to start bragging but I´m clearly the best in my class. Most of the people in my yoga class are really old but still , If you would see me there, you would be amazed. I´m that flexible. I noticed that I´m also more agile on the ice. I just hope the ghosts leave me alone from now on. I hate them so much. You can´t even see them most of the time. Some of you might think that ghosts are not even real. What were those voices in my place then ? Ghosts , bro , ghosts. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/22580-claimedi-heard-voices-final-66/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Victor 10,943 Posted July 30, 2015 Admin Share Posted July 30, 2015 dis shit cray jRuutu 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/22580-claimedi-heard-voices-final-66/#findComment-250902 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jRuutu 2,464 Posted July 30, 2015 Author Share Posted July 30, 2015 dis shit cray ish gon get even more cray in the future. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/22580-claimedi-heard-voices-final-66/#findComment-250906 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixersfan594 247 Posted July 31, 2015 Share Posted July 31, 2015 Content 3/3 - I personally found this very far stretched and lacks flow. Grammar 1.75/2 - some easy things to fix. that I make = for me to make have to usually = usually go to home = go home should not be there = should be there (no double negatives) a expert = an expert Appearance 1/1 - sure jRuutu 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/22580-claimedi-heard-voices-final-66/#findComment-251058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kylrad 178 Posted August 1, 2015 Share Posted August 1, 2015 Content 3/3 Interesting article Grammar 1.75/2 Some mistakes Taron got most of them scrared - scared Theres also lots of random spaces but that could just be the formatting Appearance 1/1 Looks fine Overall 5.75/6 Final 6/6 jRuutu 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/22580-claimedi-heard-voices-final-66/#findComment-251477 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil 5,119 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/22580-claimedi-heard-voices-final-66/#findComment-252357 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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