Tim 182 Posted March 19, 2016 Share Posted March 19, 2016 evrydayimbyfuglien and gorlab 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28949-claimedtitle-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted March 20, 2016 Share Posted March 20, 2016 This is really nice. Render effects are on point, super slick. Nice background work, but could maybe use a bit more blending from render to background. Not sure if I like the bottom border or not, doesn't distract too much though. Text is nice and somple and work well. Only complaint from me is the colouring, I think a stronger red on the render and maybe a fade to black and white in the background would be sweet. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28949-claimedtitle-reviewed/#findComment-322096 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28949-claimedtitle-reviewed/#findComment-322303 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,095 Posted March 21, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted March 21, 2016 Render effects look really slick here which is easily the strongest plus going for this ounce that I really like. The cloudy BG is nice but would be good to blend the render into it more as Jack said. Maybe instead of that grey blob on the left it would have worked to have the BG clipped over there. I also agree that a stronger red could help. Lighting is simple but pretty effective. I would drop the kerning on the text a bit and make it overall a bit larger; I think it sorta gets overshadowed by everything as it is now. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28949-claimedtitle-reviewed/#findComment-322339 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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