701 309 Posted April 26, 2016 Share Posted April 26, 2016 DollarAndADream, gorlab and Kesler 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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boubabi 4,725 Posted May 2, 2016 Share Posted May 2, 2016 looking good. I would have went with another type of font tho. and maybe not a central render/focal point. So that could be improve. Quite simple manip, but it looks good so good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Commissioner Beketov 9,020 Posted May 5, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted May 5, 2016 Definitely some cool, if not a little triply, styling on this one. The wave effect is VERY strong but I think it works to get the render as a focal point. Sadly it does make text very challenging and I think that's where you faltered a bit. Personally I would have tried a small text, maybe on a black bar, to get it out there without feeling like you are hiding it but not making it a distraction either. I'm not 100% sure that would work but it might, it's a tricky situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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