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I agreem the stroke is well placed and the text is looking good. I feel like then face could be clearer with less colors imo. The background is cool, so you could juste erase some of the effects on his face and it would fit imo. good work 

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  • boubabi changed the title to Kohler [1/2]
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This is a bit of an odd piece. The right side looks amazing with that brush stroke and the text, that's perfectly executed and looks amazing. Unfortunately the left side looks like a completely different sig. The stock work is messy and over-contrasted, the effects on the face make him look ill and the "lighting" dot (which shouldn't be dead centre BTW) is WAY under contrasted so it just looks grey. Unfortunately I think more could have been done with less on this piece.

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