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Love the render, looks absolutely beaut. The logo idea is cool but I think it may be a bit too prominent, throws off the composition a little imo. Text looks good but the black subtext doesn't really work too great. Nice piece altogether though.

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  • Daniel changed the title to Podarok [1/2]
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Logo would probably look better behind the render rather than on top of it, would make it more of a BG element and less of a focal point. Good job on the blurring to make sure it doesn't stand out too much though. Your lighting is decent but this sig would have been a great candidate for a large light source in the middle and some really strong contrast which I think would have helped. I don't mind the text but it feels just a tad sharp. Overall not a bad piece but a few minor adjustments could help.

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