BPH 112 Posted August 1, 2016 Share Posted August 1, 2016 gorlab and Wasty 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/32579-claimedclaimedbarnyashev-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
CowboyinAmerica 2,890 Posted August 7, 2016 Share Posted August 7, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/32579-claimedclaimedbarnyashev-22/#findComment-365342 Share on other sites More sharing options...
.sniffuM 1,741 Posted August 8, 2016 Share Posted August 8, 2016 Feedback I like this one a lot. The background looks great and the render's yellow jersey vibes with the blue and purple that you got going on here much better than I figured it ever would. The lighting's a bit strong and would be better served moved over to the right so it hits the render's face rather than just his shoulder, and the left side of the main text can definitely be tough to read. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/32579-claimedclaimedbarnyashev-22/#findComment-365506 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,026 Posted August 29, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted August 29, 2016 The first name in the text is completely impossible to read IMO, that should be moved elsewhere; maybe try stacking it or layering something behind so it can be read. Lighting is decent but doesn't match up with the render. The light on the render is own our right but the light source you added is on the left. Either use curves layers to re-align the lighting on his face or move the source to match. BG and effects are decent but a bit more blending could have helped. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/32579-claimedclaimedbarnyashev-22/#findComment-369812 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted October 12, 2016 Share Posted October 12, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/32579-claimedclaimedbarnyashev-22/#findComment-379452 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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