Daniel 565 Posted August 12, 2016 Share Posted August 12, 2016 Frank and Kesler 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.sniffuM 1,741 Posted August 15, 2016 Share Posted August 15, 2016 Feedback: I like this one. Render effects and feel are on point. Lighting is a tad too strong and the background could use a little bit more to it. I like the main text but the e in Marcel is a bit hard to read. Good shit using Jane Austen as a subfont, I've never seen anyone do that before but I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Commissioner Beketov 8,941 Posted September 25, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted September 25, 2016 The render effects are really nice here and the soft blue lighting is subtle and well done. I love the look of the subtext but unfortunately the main text just doesn't work for me. It's so thin that it's kinda hard to see / read and just doesn't really work well with this piece. I would also like to see a bit more detail in the BG; feels kinda bland as-is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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