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Claimed:ASW Doubles [1/2] [Reviewed]


gorlab

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I'm seeing a lot of things here that are very close to where you want them but not quite there. The blue and orange could work very well but I think the shade of orange you chose is slightly under-saturated for what you wanted to achieve. Your lighting is also very stark and nice but you placed the source on the wrong side of the render. All the light on his face (and in the BG) is on the right side but you placed the light on the left, it's visually confusing. Blending is alright and stock work is alright but just pay attention to the little things to really elevate your work.

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  • Beketov changed the title to ASW Doubles [1/2]
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the idea behind it was good, but not executed perfectly imo. lets start on the light on his back/shoulder, it shoulder go over his body imo. the light should be on the right side since the light from his face comes from the right. the font is a little bit too big for my liking, and should be closer to the render.  you did better, keep them coming tho

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