BOFish 23 Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 Christian McKenzie - DEFENSE #22 6'1", 222 lbs Michigan, USA Age: 19 Shoots: Left Christian is a Native of Michigan and has grown up with Hockey in his life. He lives Hockey and won’t see himself doing anything else in his life. He has never played Semi Professional Hockey but we feel he can adapt and grow in the environment just fine. He will be eager to make an impact and a hard-working attitude. Let’s see some on his strengths and weaknesses. Strengths Defense: B – Christian has great positioning and has great size. He is not afraid to throw his body around as well as box you out or move you to the boards. He uses his head and tends to make smart plays to avoid causing turnovers or odd man rushing opportunities. I.Q: C+ - Even though he is big and makes smart on ice decisions, other times he can get to aggressive. Christian uses his IQ to recover quickly and make up for the mistake by making second chance plays. He works hard to improve his IQ every day and often is seen studying game film. Shot Blocking: A – Christian has no fear and will throw himself in front of a shot. Using his size and defending ability to get into a position to make the stop to help his goaltender. His willingness to sacrifice his body for the shot makes him vary valuable. Passing: C – Christian is a pass first defender, he looks up the ice and launches the pass. Not always the smartest passer he prefers that than to taking the shot. He has worked hard to get his passing game up to a pro level and looks to show off his skills. Weakness’ Puck Handling: C- - Christian Has a little bit of control Issues with the puck. He is not strong on control and often dumps it early loses control or passes wildly. Christian also needs to learn how to receive a pass and what do once he has been passed to often just throwing it up the ice. Discipline: F – Christian often takes stupid penalties that could hurt his team. His anger often is the reason why he takes the penalty. He hits hard but he also hits reckless and often takes dirty shots. He hits first and thinks second. His PIM’S could be an asset or a hindrance. Scoring: D – Don’t look to Christian for any form of scoring. He has no issues blasting a shot towards net but his accuracy is no there and if he scores he will be shocked. He does not have the best hands but will often, look for the pass instead of the shot. He will occasionally shoot the puck when there is no pass available to him. Experience: F – Christians lack of experience at a pro level will in the end harm him. Not being used to the cameras and media. Look for him to grow more in the later seasons but early on his lack of experience could hurt the teams brand he is on. Will and Frank 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
hedgehog337 3,483 Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 That was fast. BOFish 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-424936 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Higgins 3,618 Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 porcupine BOFish 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-424937 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smarch 3,153 Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 Damn son. BOFish 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-424938 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho 917 Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 Someone doesn't like to fuck around! BOFish and Gudnason 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-424942 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BOFish 23 Posted March 31, 2017 Author Share Posted March 31, 2017 Can I claim 8 now? XD Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-425216 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hedgehog337 3,483 Posted March 31, 2017 Share Posted March 31, 2017 7 minutes ago, BOFish said: Can I claim 8 now? XD Yes BOFish 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-425218 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gudnason 607 Posted April 3, 2017 Share Posted April 3, 2017 Great job @BOFish and my official welcomes to both the site and the league. It's nice to see you such active right off the bat and piling on the TPE. I'm sure you would have already written a media spot if Frank wasn't so kind enough to gift you the free week. I'm not sure if you are aware, as there's quite a bit to absorb as a new member/player to the VHL, but just wanted to remind you that you can also write a 150-word article every week for 1 TPE; more details can be found here. Nice presentation and formatting; easy to read and looks good on the eyes. You could use some color like blue for the strengths and red for the weaknesses. -0.25 (No just kidding, people who have been here since the beginning will get the joke.) Don't want to seem too anal and scare you from writing anymore, but there's a lot of random capitalized words. Looks like you're well on your way to making a shutdown defenseman. Also love how realistic you graded yourself instead of some people who give themselves A's and B's across the board. Also, seems like your player lost some weight since he was created! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/38995-12-christian-mckenzie-rp/#findComment-426504 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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