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review- i likw how you changed the name part. cool back ground and feel of the them. i think next time try adding a logo swap. but still pretty good. 7/10

review: the storyline will need to continue throughout your career! well written good format i like how you built the hype for it and picked the names. hopefully we see this continue while you add on to your hit list! just a fun piece i enjoy and seeing the community react and get the buzz for it is always something i like myself it shows that people who read your work actually did and enjoyed it. 9/10

The San Diego Marlins have now been seeing some better results past few weeks and the team itself has done a really good job here at recruitment and overall earning. the final stretch has been something that this team has been getting more excited about since not only are they winning and playing better as a team but also seeing dirty old YUCK-ON underneath them in the VHLM standings. General Manger the Boss Mr. Sales has been on a mission too always be better then the dejuiced bum that's YUCK-ONS General manger. For one player on the Marlins Milk Jugs has been very vocal on making sure there net will always be filled with puck and will always come out on to. The best yet is to come out of Jigs as he will look to still prove whys he's the top defensemen in the league and will showcase his skillset. If Juice and YUCK-ON think there better just take a look at the standings currently. i mean the Marlins is the best team and as of late we've been unstoppable. The Marlins have won the battle but the war is far from over my friend, but for now we will let the standings do the talking. please note this is war between YUCK-ON and the dejuiced scrub. we will see you later but for now we got big games to play in called... playoffs which only the good teams play in unlike YUCK-ON. the Marlins are only getting started for there post season run! @Juice @thadthrasher mwhahaha

2nd week claim as well as for Claiming for First Gen Doubles

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@bigAL I SHOULD BE TOP FIVE!!!! hows that?

its no question i joined the league a little later in the season however I've been earning to make up for it. I look at the draft rankings and tpe wise and where i sit each week and quite honestly i thought i would be a later round pick for VHL but im seriously starting to think I've pushed my name into the first round debate. now i know this probably makes me look bad for a public thing like this but i really think its a possible outcome for me and my first players career. i don't think it'd be like top five or something crazy but a later first rounder could be realistic and i kind of want people that actually read/ see this to comment and let me know there thoughts on what my draft ranking would be. i would love some extra tpe if we could do draft predictions as i think betting on myself for tpe would be cool anyways short ramble here as i wrote theme week and posted so hopefully i can keep grinding tpe to make the argument of first round realistic then me sounding crazy. Hopefully i have a good enough build too help the Marlins out and continue our grind as a team. I'm just excited for the draft and seeing where myself and my teammates all end up. i know saying i could be a first rounder may come off bad but i'd like some input on the draft and how rankings work/ what do gms all look for etc.

Jugs Multi From Different Planet What if and i mean what if Milk Jugs the VHLM rising star defencemen had a Multi that came from space? Well for those who are wondering this, like the millions of fans that or just die hard's of the VHLM you are in for a treat! Yes! This story will not only be published and be a main storyline throughout the sports world no! It's going to something that people worldwide will be following! Why? Because this story is something that has never been seen or heard of before and too this day scientist are still trying to figure this out! This Milk Jugs Multi has been found from a strange call to the general manger of San Diego Marlins hockey team of the VHLM. The general manger Thad ( @thadthrasher) has now been advised this strange activity as a result Thad had too call up his lovely wife the one and only @LuluSalesAway to tell her he loves her. This had Thad scared and scrambling. Thad might be the general manger of San Diego Marlins but he's also the Regional manger of a paper company that proudly sponsors the VHLM as well as the Marlins, the Dunder Mifflin of San Diego has always been supportive of the league! Anyways sorry for the paid ad! back to the story! After the call of when Thad called his wife to say he loves her in case something were to happen. Thad ended up calling his assistant general manger @Eldredman too say lock down the team and protect the rising star Milk Jugs! As for safety reasons Thad can be a little extreme however who could really blame him right? i mean if you got a call saying that somebody your close with has a multi from a different planet I'm sure you'd want to take the actions needed to protect them..... or at least i hope however if this happened to me about @Prout well lets say i wouldn't say nothing and well that famous saying Now Thad had to really make some of his toughest decisions due to this. So what does this great leader do? Well I will tell you! He sets up a phone meeting with Milk Jugs and the team in a private room that's in a location that nobody knows about. Thad basically had to kidnap all his players to drive them in a bus that he made himself so the government wouldn't track him. This meeting he set up was not like any. This had feared the whole team and what was next and what the possible outcomes could be. Now the phone rings as the team is gathered around a long rectangular table as Thad answers as the head of this team. Thad " Hello." Multi Milk Jugs "i know where you are and who your with. you cannot hide from me. I will show up and show why i am the better Milk Jugs." Thad " you will not find us. whoever you are I've been to prison and I've seen some things. this will not stand." Phone hangs up What's next? Well to be safe the team had decided to stay in Thads little dungeon that he created while feeding them slim Jims and mayo for desert as its suppose to be ice cream with some imagination. As there was some buzzing from the phone Thad would not tell anyone what was about to happen as he still thought this was some type of terrorist attack so he got a new phone privately delivered by the VHLMs sponsor for phones. Thad thought this was a terrorist that showed up! it was just the IT guy delivering as chuck was not available at this time. The Arrival! YES! that's right the multi has shown up. This Multi of Milk Jugs looks exactly the same but! The multi has one eye and is not small but rather much bigger and by that a 7'2 425 lbs. monster. The team here in San Diego looks not so feared as this multi approaches the real Milk Jugs. As they get talking the multi has made a request and a proposal too Thad. Thad looks nervous on what's going to be asked as he loves his rising star player in Milk Jugs who's bloomed into a top three defence for the team this season. The offer that was proposed was to recruit Milk Jugs to the Space Force Hockey League for the Saturn Stars. The Saturn Stars are in need for Milk Jugs to help win in there final game seven winner takes all. Milks Jugs multi wants Milk Jugs to be on the top pair to play along side him as the pairing would be the Jugs line. Why only Milk Jugs? Well after Milk Jugs was born there was this doctor named Creed. Creed was not like any doctor you would think of. This doctor looked at baby's and health. Well Creed started building multis for space and too travel other planets he set this up knowing Milk Jugs was going to be a rising star in hockey. Milk Jugs was scared for that question and what happened in the past. Nobody even knew the history behind Creed as Milk Jugs try's to forget the past and blanks it out of his mind so he can only focus on hockey the only thin he's good at. Milk Jugs went into a private meeting with Thad as they spoke what was best for the team and the safety. The big final decision was made as Milk Jugs decided to dos something nobody expected.... Not even Thad. JUGS WALKED OUT AND KAPOW! SUCKERED THE MULTI This had the team all shocked including Thad! what just happened?! Milk Jugs did not hold back! why? Milk Jugs has been waiting for this moment his whole life as he tried to block this piece of history from his mind. Milk Jugs had been wanting one more thing. Dr Creed. Creed was not here however it seems like Milk Jugs has a plan... YELLS GM THAD! Thad now has called Creed and guess who shows up. This is the moment Milk Jugs has been waiting for. The Multi and now Dr Creed in the same room with Jugs having red in his eyes. The time has come Jugs has both of them in the same room with just the three of them. Milk Jugs advised the team to leave because they won't want to see what happens next. Jugs grabs his hockey stick wrapped in barbed wire. Jugs had walked out with just the stick covered in blood with that crazy laugh and smile looking stress free. Nobody will ever know what all events happened in there as he advised " I took care of business" . The team now had to get back to work and get ready for game day as they've now missed a couple practice's due to these events. After Jugs takes care of business the team hits the ice for game day practice quickly. The team was in much need for this and to get there legs going after the Multi appeared. Milk Jugs seemed to be in a much better place mentally and has been happier already. Maybe this was the final step to his road to glory. The Marlins did however loose that night to the Yukon Rush in game number 321 5-4 game in SO. This was a well fought battle by the San Diego Marlins and have proved there all with Jugs and will be much better now with this rising star happy and more focused after taking care of his dark shady path. Jugs will now look to be more motivated and focused as he's now only thinking about the game he loves. We will have to see what's next for this team as the season is yet to be completed and will have to continue to fight hard like fellow teammate Jugs did. Question of the day is, Would the San Diego Marlins of won tonight if they didn't have a late practice and didn't have all those events happen? I would think that these events that transpired would have something to do with the outcome. Milk Jugs will now be at rest knowing he dealt with both Creed and the Multi that he despised. i mean nobody will ever know what all Creed did for his experiments and all the reasons Jugs tried to hide this path. however it seems to only get Milk Jugs more ready to become a better hockey player and person being at ease. This moment will be something to remember for the rest of his career. Maybe this is what the San Diego Marlins team needed? More team bonding? Thad ha stated that he supports what Jugs did and expects big things from his rising star defender that he cares so much about. This story is something no member in the VHLM or VHL should take lightly as Milk Jugs may not be the biggest but you will need to think of this the next time you touch his goalie or stand in front of the net while he defends. ( 1532 words- 3 weeek claim 1/3 claim + theme week!) Thanks for reading if you made it this far i know this was rushed but I wanted to get it done in time for theme week claim! people mentioned @Prout @thadthrasher @LuluSalesAway @Eldredman

review, this is really neat. i like the cartoony feel and look. i like the humor and how its not as a serious one as what most make and it gets a new feel but a nice one for a change. itd be cool to add a teammate and do something like this next... love the gta add on i really enjoyed this one. 8/10

review: yes a tag for people mentioned! i this the flow of the conversation was smoother this time around. I liked the teammate shout outs and the kind words about me lol. i cant wait for more and hope too hear some history on the team as well as past players management would be cool to hear about. just would like less dead air and some improvements on the flow but overall its improved from last one! I like the intro as well. MARLINS TERRITORY BABY

1) to earn tpe and continue to work alot irl 2) nothings better then a pro hockey player.. im a star 3) the good stuff that gets the team going 4) yes yes yes. loved it!! 5) i dont know just dident play well as a team... on to the next one 6) garden and work lol .. and be the VHL star i am !

YESSS really like this idea and title! thanks for shout out! need more marlins and vhlm talk. cant wait for more! maybe add guests?? add some segments for future ones and get us some memes going! i really enjoyed this and will be listening to more. add tags to members mentioned next time as well. 9/10

YESSS really like this idea and title! thanks for shout out! need more marlins and vhlm talk. cant wait for more! maybe add guests?? add some segments for future ones and get us some memes going! i really enjoyed this and will be listening to more. add tags to members mentioned next time as well. 9/10

review: i like seeing GM thoughts and for the draft. i like the article and seeing these things posted. you have good formatting as a writer. your take on the new creates was very interesting take and i liked the willingness to keeping new members engaged to stay long term. good article! 8.5/10

review: i like seeing GM thoughts and for the draft. i like the article and seeing these things posted. you have good formatting as a writer. your take on the new creates was very interesting take and i liked the willingness to keeping new members engaged to stay long term. good article! 8.5/10

ok so i know I'm new and all but after looking around the league and just looking at sims i really think i suck and here's a little reason why - my low point total as a offensive defencemen - i am currently sitting at -3 already... ouch - 21 shots blocked in 30 games, that to me seems low for a defencemen. now only having one goal in that thirty games span also was not what i expected and i don't understand it all yet but with my build I'd think that my offensive production should be better even more so looking at other users builds in the VHLM that Milk Jugs should be better overall. i hope i can get this fixed soon for my team and player. this just leaves me thinking i won't be a good prospect or draft pick with my current stats and play level. i thought that i could of snuck my way into the first round or even early second but have had no teams showing the signs of interest or talking/ scouting yet. Is that too early yet? i guess my goal in coming weeks is to earn and just overall play better while applying my tpe as much as possible and earning. with that said i feel compared to this draft im out of place for tpe ranking. maybe these are just over thinking thoughts of mine i'm going to continue to develop its just hard learning while trying to be successful on my player creation lol

second and last claim

second and last claim

second and last claim

+ 10 Milk Jugs

+ 10 Milk Jugs