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sherifflobo

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  1. Effort: 2/2 - Yes Look: 2.25/3 - I struggled with this because I think it has a nice clean look to this, but a couple of things really drag it down. The blob of light blue light is where my eye goes directly. The eyes should always immediately go to the render when you're trying to establish good flow. Second, the render effects are way too strong on this. It makes some of the render look low quality (the jersey and helmet especially). The biggest mistake I find with topaz (?) is people overuse the effects and it negatively affects a sig. I like your 3 Moons logo on the board as an ad, it's a nice subtle addition to the sig. Overall, it's not a bad sig, the two biggest flaws prevent me from giving this a 2.5 or higher. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 5.25/6
  2. Effort; 2/2 - Yes Look: 2.75/3 - This is almost a 3, but I don't particularly like the white-ish dots around the render's face. I think it distracts from an otherwise nice sig. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.75/6
  3. Effort: 2/2 - Yes Look: 2/3 - I would move the text down and over to either the right or left of the render. I would also put the text lines together, one on top of the other, or make the size of the text smaller, so it fits better like the hill sig you're wearing. Blending is actually pretty good, but the stock work could be improved imo. It's not bad, per se, but I think it looks kind of plain. The render could also use some lighting as well, to make it a little less dull and bring the whole sig together. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5/6
  4. It's probably some sort of shade that is the same colour as Salmon
  5. Super close between 1 and 5, but I don't want NHL logos on the banner.
  6. Effort: 2/2 - Yes Look: 3/3 - This is money. No complaints at all, love the lighting. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6
  7. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.5/3 - Yeah it's really overcontrasted and the green looks a little odd. The text is okay, I just think this needs some tweaking to make this really good. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 FINAL: 5/6
  8. I've been playing the shit out of MLB the Show. My pitcher keeps getting almost no hitters (1-2 hit games).
  9. Good, bitch is trying to steal my Riga hits record.
  10. The better team will win.
  11. Effort: 2/2 - Yes Look: 2.5/3 - The text choice doesn't work and the main stock I feel is a bit overdone, and is drowning out the render a bit. Blending is alright, and it could really use some solid lighting to bring it together. I would love to see some more done to it like some adjustment layers to really bring it all together. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.5/6
  12. Look: 2/2 - Yes Effort: 2.75/3 - I think this a tad overblended, and the lighting is a bit strong too. Depth isn't that good, either, but the flow works on this, and the colouring and text are nice. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.75/6
  13. Effort: 2/2 - Yes Look: 2.75/3 - The renders are a tad blurry, especially the goalie one. This could use some better lighting as well, but all in all, it's a pretty solid banner. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.75/6
  14. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.75/3 - The right side of this is extremely plain, compined with a small render, takes away from the flow of this imo. Otherwise, I really like this. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.75/6
  15. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 3/3 - Love this. I think it's kind of simple, but I don't think there's enough to dock here. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6
  16. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.75/3 - The blending around the arm distracts from an otherwise nice graphic. Lighting is nice, stockwork is pretty good, but the blending around the arm doesn't work. Creativity: 1/1 -Yep Total: 5.75/6
  17. Sad to see you go, Slobo. Good luck with everything.
  18. Effort: 2/2 - I'll give it to you. Look: 1.5/3 - I think the renders are a bit too small, and the glows around them don't work. I would make the renders a bit bigger, and place them closer to the logo. The background feels a bit messy to me, and banners, at least imo work better with something a bit more simple. You always want to be able to pull colours from your render and use them in your graphics, so the yellow on the Chara render doesn't really work with this particular background. Just keep working on the basics, and you'll get better. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 4.5/6
  19. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.5/3 - I think lighting on the render itself really needs to be improved, the current lighting is okay, but the render itself feels a bit dull, and my eyes are going more towards the lighting source, rather than the render. The overall sig also feels a bit simple to me, and I think more could be done to it to really make it look great. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.5/6
  20. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 1.75/3 - I think the general idea behind this is pretty cool, but a couple of things are really holding it back. I think the stocks are really overpowering the render. I would keep working on stock work in general, because it's really easy to overdo stockwork. The lighting is also not working for me. The text would work better without the gradient on it as well. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 4.75/6
  21. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.5/3 - I'm docking for two big reasons. 1. the text doesn't work for me. Like Bash said, it's got a weird look to it and doesn't fit to overall look. and 2. That bright light/stock just off the render's face. It's very distracting and could have been toned down. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 FINAL: 6/6
  22. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 3/3 - I think this looks great, can't find much I dislike about it. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 6/6 FINAL: 6/6
  23. Holy fuck 33 tpe? Best 4.5 Million I've ever spent.
  24. Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.75/3 - I agree with Beketov here, most of it is nice, but the centre is too over-contrasted for my liking. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.75/6 FINAL: 6/6
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