Frank 5,208 Posted May 23, 2021 Share Posted May 23, 2021 dlamb, Gaikoku-hito, enigmatic and 1 other 1 3 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/103949-last-attempt/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenGato 101 Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 Review: This is a really great take on the banner. I'm going to lead with my critique: the effects on top of the graphic shouldn't have gone on top of the text. It isn't the main part of the banner so it need all of the clarity it can get to be legible. I like how you pointed the players towards the sides of banner they are represented on. I like the background, the header, and organization at top. This is the sort of banner that could work with the just top of the banner or the champions text and below, which is a sign of good branding. I'm a huge fan! 9.7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/103949-last-attempt/#findComment-851306 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BOOM 8,745 Posted May 25, 2021 Share Posted May 25, 2021 Another super clean, pro-looking submission. I really like that you have combined the renders for the two different leagues into the body of the banner instead of having two different segments like most do. The render work, logos/uni's both look great with zero issues. Inclusion of player names is a nice touch. 9/10 Easy. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/103949-last-attempt/#findComment-851619 Share on other sites More sharing options...
STZ 5,359 Posted May 29, 2021 Share Posted May 29, 2021 Review: This was one of my favorite submissions just as it stood out from the rest. I love the cutout style comic book effect. That Bears full uniform change is killer. I think Miami's is cool too, but I think they are more of a pink than red uniform. I really think where things came a part was doing the cutout effect over the whole graphic including the text. I think it made the text look smudged, which isn't a bad thing, but when you line it up with the other submissions it kinda takes the "pop" out of the graphic. The render effects are so cool, I think it's overshadowed by the monotoned text. I still think this was a top submission, even with the mini-Aho. Please don't make this your last attempt! 9.5/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/103949-last-attempt/#findComment-852285 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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