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With the VHL season 43 entry draft coming up, Pablo has some interest in where he wants to be drafted. The are so many great teams in the league, but not all teams have arms wide open for Pablo Escabar. There are three great teams that Pablo is very interested in playing for next season. Which ever of these three teams draft Pablo, He plans on being a strong dedicated player. As well as a franchise player. The three teams Pablo is interested in are as followed;

 

1) Seattle Bears

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One of the team's Pablo Escabar is most interested in playing for is the Seattle Bears. The Bears have a really great group of guys, and they are all very easy to get along with. Pablo's mentor Niklaus Mikaelson (Mr.Jones) is the starting goalie for the Bears as well as a great friend and he has been for years. A couple months ago Mr. Jones introduced Pablo Escabar to, the general manager of the Bears, Brady Stropko (Mr. Grumpy Bear). The minute Pablo met Bushito they hit it off immediately.  A friendship was created. Pablo also would love to be paired up with the legendary Phil Villeneuve on the blue line. We will see on draft day if Seattle is interested in Pablo Escabar.

 

2) Calgary Wranglers

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The Calgary Wranglers have had their eyes on Pablo Escabar ever since Pablo appeared in the VHL. Eaglesfan036 has shown a lot of interest in having Pablo on his roster. Pablo and Eaglesfan036 talk almost on a daily basis and have a great friendship building up. Currently Calgary is rebuilding, so the only down fall is that they would not be looking for a championship for a couple of seasons. Pablo is not all about winning championships though. Pablo is in the VHL to have fun, play hockey, and meet great guys. These three things can definitely be conquered under the leadership of eaglesfan. A weird obsession Pablo has with Calgary is the colors. He feels he would look very sexy in a black and red jersey.  We will see on draft day if Calgary stays interested in Pablo Escabar on draft day.

 

3) Stockholm Vikings

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Stockholm Vikings have recently finished getting out of a rebuild stage and are very hungry for a championship. Last season they scored a lot of great picks from the draft. The draftee's made them a very strong contender. This season they managed to make the playoffs over the Davos'. Pablo Escabar would really enjoy being on a team with Vogon Jeltz. Jeltz is a very skilled young individual. Stockholm's general manager is a very kind and caring person. Boubabi always puts his team and players above himself. He is always friendly and builds a friendship with every single player. The man of my dreams. ( bahahahahahah).  We will see if Stockholm is interested in Pablo Escabar on draft day.

 

Every Other Team

 

If the listed teams above show no interest in Pablo Escabar on draft day. Well then Pablo would be happy playing for any team that would welcome him in with open arms. No matter where Pablo goes he strives to be a franchise player no matter what. Pablo Escabar and myself would like to thank you all for your time. We cant wait to see you all on draft day in the off season, it will be a very exciting day.

Edited by Mr. Escabar
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When will people learn to never use yellow text?!?

It is widely known that it cannot be read, is annoying, and is linked to colon cancer. JESUS!

It's one of those things like updating your player that simply just get ignored by some.

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Content: 3/3 - Great write up. I hope that whichever team you go to, you'll be a star one day. You've been great since coming here.

Grammar: 2/2 - Nothing huge, just a few things.

 

"VHL season 43 entry draft" - VHL Season 43 Entry Draft. Should be capitalized, as it's a title.

"We will see on draft day if Calgary stays interested in Pablo Escabar on draft day." - more of a nitpick, but you say 'on draft day' twice in this sentence, which isn't needed.

"The draftee's made them" - draftees. Doesn't need an apostrophe.

"playoffs over the Davos'." - Davos doesn't need an apostrophe either.

 

Appearance: 1/1 - Everything looks very solid and professional.

Overall: 6/6

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