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Really cool feel to this. Colouring is sweet and overall lighting is good. Could use a bit more depth. Text is sick. The lighting right by his face is a bit overpowering for me, but other than that great sig.

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The colouring is interesting although I feel as if it might be a tad too strong for the lighting that is present. Strong colouring is fine in itself but you need to get some strong contrast lighting on the face to really make it pop. Unfortunately your lighting looks washed out and doesn't seem to have any effect on the render. Get some curves layers on the render to create contrast (or burn / dodge it for added bonus) to make the light do what you want. As is this looks like natural lighting that you slapped a brush onto. Lighting / Colouring aside I like the text style and the depth but I think they are backwards. Blur the BG (lest side especially) a bit more and bring the text back into focus. Overall, well done, just needs a few adjustments to really pop.

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