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The season is literally around the corner and Kai Roberts is more than ecstatic right now. He will be getting the chance to show off his talent on his new team with his new teammates. He is hoping that he can take on some sort of leadership role now. He hasn't really been known as the leader type at any point in his career, but it should start somewhere. Hopefully if he can show teams how much of a leader and team player he can be, he would be able to get drafted to the right team and be able to help out quite a bit. He isn't certain what team will pick him up but he doesn't mind playing for a contender or even playing on a rebuilding team. His agent Da Trifecta has been known to hate certain teams but has now opened up to his client playing for any team in the league. Down below will be the rankings of teams Kai would like to play for.

 

1. Cologne Express

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The Cologne Express was the very first team that agent Da Trifecta's first represented player went to in the draft. He was a part of the season 34 draft and he got his chance to play for the team in the season 35 draft. The reason for that was he wasn't exactly as developed as he wanted to be to be able to play in the pro's. He is open to a reunion and would love to come back.

 

2. Toronto Legion

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Despite the problems between agent Da Trifecta and GM Molholt, it seems like this wouldn't be something that could happen. The team does need a center and Kai Roberts could be that guy. If DT and Molholt can put aside their differences, maybe this pairing could work out for the betterment of the team. Kai would give this team the top center they need to be able to help this team rise to greatness. They have a solid roster in place and Roberts would only strengthen it.

 

3. Riga Reign

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The Reign are about to enter a rebuild and the team is going to have to move on from Bronson Faux at center. Bringing on Kai Roberts would solidify the center position for at least the next three seasons. This could be huge for the franchise as they would get their top center and they would be able to move forward from there. With GM Toast bringing in his player he represents, being a goalie already handles that spot too.

 

4. Calgary Wranglers

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The Calgary Wranglers are a team that agent Da Trifecta said he would never ever play for. Now it seems like this team has moved up since then. With a rebuild coming in from them as well, it would be wise for them to grab Kai Roberts to help start off that rebuild. This team could go in quite a few different directions but Roberts playing behind TebowGow could really help out his development. He could learn from a veteran and not have the pressure to start on the top line early in his career.

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1 hour ago, Da Trifecta said:

 

4. Calgary Wranglers

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The Calgary Wranglers are a team that agent Da Trifecta said he would never ever play for. Now it seems like this team has moved up since then. With a rebuild coming in from them as well, it would be wise for them to grab Kai Roberts to help start off that rebuild. This team could go in quite a few different directions but Roberts playing behind TebowGow could really help out his development. He could learn from a veteran and not have the pressure to start on the top line early in his career.

 

Nice logo for them, might want to fix that ;)

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Nice job with this article. I think in writing about Toronto you may have mixed words...

On 3/14/2016 at 2:04 AM, Da Trifecta said:

Despite the problems between agent Da Trifecta and GM Molholt, it seems like this wouldn't be something that could happen.

I think it would be despite problems between you two, it seems like this is something that could happen? Otherwise despite is used wrong here.

Other than that, the article was perfectly fine. No distracting grammar issues, nothing like that. Keep it up, I think I've noticed an improvement with some of the minor typos and all that stuff will just come naturally.

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He's saying the context doesn't make sense - if it was despite of, it would be the opposite thing. Like, despite the fact that Toronto is winning, they won't make the playoffs. Whereas, despite the fact that Toronto is winning, they'll make the playoffs doesn't make any sense. I think your sentence would make more sense as something like, Because of the problems...it seems like this wouldn't happen. Or something similar.

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