CoachReilly 688 Posted April 9, 2016 Share Posted April 9, 2016 Kendrick and Daniel 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29611-asg-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil 5,119 Posted April 10, 2016 Share Posted April 10, 2016 hee-hee.. .this is an anagram for "VAG SHL" Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29611-asg-reviewed/#findComment-328028 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted April 10, 2016 Share Posted April 10, 2016 looks rushed imo. The text isn't really visible, contrast wise. The texture work seems random and nothing stands out really. I expect better from you, but still, double week is a double week. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29611-asg-reviewed/#findComment-328196 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,026 Posted April 11, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted April 11, 2016 (edited) I really like what I see you going for but I don't think this piece is quite there. I think the text is actually fantastic and really could have been striking with the right work but it sorta falls flat as is. Remove some of the weird smudgy stocks that are giving this a grunge feel; get an exposure layer on the BG stuff and really make that text pop as the focal point. That isn't advice I give often but I think it would work really well here; I'd almost have everything else feel a tad bit out of focus to slam the point home. That's just me though. Honestly, if you want, shoot me the PSD. I have an idea that I think could really make this thing pop if it works. I'm just curious. Edited April 11, 2016 by Beketov Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29611-asg-reviewed/#findComment-328396 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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