STZ 5,389 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 Da Trifecta 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 I'll give you one last shot *Also make me a new NYA sig babs STZ 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491033 Share on other sites More sharing options...
STZ 5,389 Posted December 18, 2017 Author Share Posted December 18, 2017 5 minutes ago, Kendrick said: I'll give you one last shot *Also make me a new NYA sig babs This was gonna be a Keller sig, but I was panicing for time so I could get DeGrath's update in time for the final.. I wanna take my time with yours expensive seafood dinner type Da Trifecta 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491039 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 Just now, STZ said: This was gonna be a Keller sig, but I was panicing for time so I could get DeGrath's update in time for the final.. I wanna take my time with yours expensive seafood dinner type Please call me back after though, that would suck if you didn't. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491040 Share on other sites More sharing options...
STZ 5,389 Posted December 18, 2017 Author Share Posted December 18, 2017 7 minutes ago, Kendrick said: Please call me back after though, that would suck if you didn't. what's the rule? 72 hrs? Kendrick 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491050 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 LookIf you hadOne shotOr one opportunityTo seize everything you ever wantedIn one momentWould you captureOr just let it slip? YoHis palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavyThere's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghettiHe's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491113 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 3 minutes ago, Kesler said: His palms are heavy, knees weak, mom's spaghettiThere's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghettiHe's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and mom's spaghetti Fixed STZ 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491116 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 6 minutes ago, Kendrick said: Fixed Damn, do you have a writing credit on Lose Yourself? Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491121 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 1 minute ago, Kesler said: Damn, do you have a writing credit on Lose Yourself? Yeah just bought it. Cost an entire Tim Hortons hockey card pack Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted December 18, 2017 Share Posted December 18, 2017 5 minutes ago, Kendrick said: Yeah just bought it. Cost an entire Tim Hortons hockey card pack Questionable whether that was worth it, those packs are quality. Kendrick 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-491124 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exlaxchronicles 415 Posted December 29, 2017 Share Posted December 29, 2017 The right side of the render seems to be the best part of the SIG to me. Everything is awash in that white cloudish exposure on the left. I think if maybe you used a darker font or even had the same BG as you did on the right side of your goalies head with a dark font, it could've been the SIG's saving grace. A valiant attempt when pressed for time. Btw, every time I see your name STZ for some reason the Z turns to a D in my head.N no, not on my head! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-493371 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quik 4,113 Posted January 15, 2018 Share Posted January 15, 2018 Review: Not going to lie, I'm not a huge fan of this one. It's very overexposed, especially on the left, and I'm not big on the text either. The render effects are obviously well done, but I think the screen layer over him is just too heavy and washes away a lot of the effort put into it. The text I think could have done well being broken up and stacked on the left side, taking away some of the empty space created by the stocks there - right now the stockwork on that side just seems a little heavy handed and distracting. Not your best work, but I still love you, just don't fly so close to the sun my man STZ 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/46030-one-last-shot-22/#findComment-495837 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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