Effort: 2/2 - Put a lot in here, nice work.
Look: 2.25/3 - Good work on the jersey change, for starters. Overall it isn't bad, but there's some things that I think will help you a lot. First, try to keep the focal on your render. It's okay to add the team's logo, but I usually keep it small and aligned with the text. Next, try to use simple fonts, and let your stock work make the text look cool. Keep up the improvement.
Creativity: 1/1 - Nice colouring.
Total: 5.25/6