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  1. Effort: 2/2 - Full marks here for gif sig. Look: 2.5/3 - Stock work is pretty good but maybe a bit too intense. Text is kinda boring, could use something to spice it up. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep. Total: 5.5/6
  2. Effort: 2/2 - Yep, nice effort overall. Look: 2.25/3 - Two main things that would really help here. Lighting, and text. For lighting, try making a layer set to Soft Light. Use a large soft brush and use black and white. White for areas that should be the focal, and black for areas that don't need to part of the focal. For text, just try to replicate what you like around here. Keep sticking to simple fonts, and try to let the sig do the work, not the text. Creativity: 1/1 - Interesting stock work. Total: 5.25/6
  3. Effort: 2/2 - Yes sir, nice improvement I'm seeing out of you. Look: 2.5/3 - Lighting is a big improvement from last week. Good contrast. Text is actually quite good, if anything try making the white part of it a very light grey instead. Stock work could be better but that will come with time. As for transitioning to photoshop, feel free to PM me about anything related to it, or just make a post in the graphics/design forum. Plenty of people will love to help. The change will be worth it! Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6
  4. Effort: 2/2 - Yeah I can see enough was done. Look: 2.5/3 - Not a huge fan of this. Text irks me a bit, the shadow is a little cheesy, try just making a layer underneath it and doing a bit of soft black brushing...not too intense. Stock work isn't your best, the geometry should have been erased over his head, and the tree doesn't really fit. Not bad overall but you can do better. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 5.5/6
  5. Effort: 2/2 - Definitely enough here, great work. Look: 3/3 - Sick colouring, love the text, great stock work. No complaints here. Creativity: 1/1 - I'm a sucker for this font Nice work overall. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  6. Effort: 2/2 - Yeppers Look: 3/3 - Stock work is on point, lighting is awesome. Not too sure how I feel about the colouring on the face but it's not enough to dock. Great work. Creativity: 1/1 - Love the grainy look. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  7. Effort: 2/2 - Defs brah. Look: 3/3 - You've been absolutely on fire recently. Sick composition work, colouring is great, text is solid. No complaints. Creativity: 1/1 - Mmmmhmmmm. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  8. Effort: 2/2 - Yeah I can tell enough was done here, good job. Look: 2.5/3 - Looks a bit dark overall to me. Text could definitely be changed. A bit smaller, maybe lowercase instead and could use some flare around it. Good work overall. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool bg concept and nice colouring. Total: 5.5/6
  9. Effort: 2/2 - Love seeing your progression, keep it up man. Look: 2.75/3 - Really close to a 6! Overall look is great but it's just too dark around the edges. The lighting idea is good, but it's just a bit too much. Great stock work and colouring though. If anything maybe a bit over-contrasted around the face. Creativity: 1/1 - Love it. Total: 5.75/6
  10. Effort: 2/2 - Definitely. Look: 3/3 - Loving the high-contrast look here. And obviously the insane zombie manip. Nicely themed and the overall look is consistent. Sick stuff. Creativity: 1/1 - Le duh. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  11. Effort: 2/2 - For sure, lots done here. Look: 2.75/3 - Really nice work overall, looks a little bit low quality mostly in the background and the stocks. Pretty good text and definitely good stock work. Could use some more dramatic lighting. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes sir. Total: 5.75/6
  12. Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, text etc. It's all there. Look: 2.5/3 - Couple things that's would really help this sig. First, the text. It's decent but kind of stark, maybe a colour that matches a bit more would have helped (dark blue). Next is the contrast on the render..next time drop a Brightness & Contrast adjustment layer above the render and set it to a clipping mask so it only affects the render. Bump up the contrast on it so it pops a bit more. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice stock work and composition. Total: 5.5/6
  13. Effort: 2/2 - Lots of stuff done here, full marks for effort. Look: 2.25/3 - I like the render blending here but sadly it really doesn't blend into the background at all. Try to keep more of a consistent colour scheme. The blue to orange/red kinda throws it off. For the text, try to pull it in a bit closer to the render, and usually it's flows better when there's less text, maybe just a name, or at least keep it a bit more even. Keep up the good work though, you've got great style. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.25/6
  14. Effort: 2/2 - It's all there, as usual. Look: 3/3 - No complaints. Love the motion, the subtle colouring, lighting. Great work. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool grungy feel but flows really well. Nice job. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
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  17. Effort: 2/2 - Solid stock work, text work and colouring. Look: 3/3 - The text is sick, colouring is perfect, and I love the stocks. Second blurred render is kinda unneccessary in my opinion but doesn't really distract too much. Creativity: 1/1 - Very unique look, good work Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  18. Effort: 2/2 - Absolutely. Look: 3/3 - Stellar work. Awesome depth-of-field, great text. As other's mentioned in the cnc the face is a bit dark but I think it adds to the mood nicely Creativity: 1/1 - Great colouring Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  19. Effort: 2/2 - I see it, nice work! Blending, colouring, text work. Look: 2.5/3 - Main issue here is it's a bit too over-contrasted. The background becomes a bit too distracting with the intense lights and darks. The text composition is nice, but the colour of it doesn't really fit. Nice work overall. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes sir Total: 5.5/6
  20. Effort: 2/2 - I'm seeing definite steady improvement, keep it up. Look: 2.25/3 - Bushito is right on all counts. I'll offer some advice for text though. For fonts, I tend to stick to the simplest of simple. Arial, Helvetica, and sometimes Times New Roman. That doesn't mean never use other fonts, but they're often easy to work with since they aren't distracting. Try adding a different background rectangle behind the text, instead of a border. A while ago I made this guide to help with a few things that beginners tend to get stuck on, hope it helps: http://www.vhlforum.com/index.php?/topic/2501-jacks-guide-to-making-not-shitty-sigs/ Creativity: 1/1 - Cool colouring! FInal: 5/6
  21. Effort: 2/2 - Keep it up! I'm liking your style. Look: 2.25/3 - Bushito pretty much got it all, I'd just like to say that I like the styling of the text, just try to pull it in a bit closer to the render. Creativity: 1/1 - Absolutely. Final: 5/6
  22. Effort: 2/2 - Keep it up! Look: 2.5/3 - Close to 2.75/3 territory for me but not quite there. Careful with intense gradients on text, try lowering the opacity a bit. Colouring is nice but a bit too harsh as well. Nice overall. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool colouring and stock work. FInal: 6/6
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