I would love to help and be part of the writing team. I've just submitted a new media post if you want to check that out and check out my style. Cheers
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This is probably one of my favourite hockey banners. The colours chosen are really incredible and work well together. The VHL team logos on each players jersey is really well done too. I think the writing under the logo needs to be a little bit darker as I find it pretty hard to read. But other than that this banner is really solid.
I really like this graphic and mainly because it's different. Normally I wouldn't like the background you've chosen but I think it really works in this and it's probably because of the rest of the colours you have chosen. The main thing I enjoy about this is that he's wearing headphones. Most of the graphics are posted with hockey players, and that makes sense because this is a hockey forum, but it's nice to see people creating something different. The one thing I would change however is the font used. I think a simpler, thinner font would look a little better.
Overall I think this is a great graphic and I hope we see more creative ones like this in the future.
I think this graphic is a good starting point but needs a little work. I personally am not a fan of the text chosen on the left and would go with something a little more simple. I'd also take the background you have behind it as it's not really needed. I like the picture you have chosen and the writing for "Johannes Benoit" but think he needs to be photoshopped into the background a little better. I'm personally not very good with photoshop either so I can't give you any help but that would be one thing I'd look into. I think if the background was focused just like the player that might help a bit. The fact that the player is focused and the background isn't really makes it look off to me.
I really think this is a good start but do think some improvements could be made. Great job and keep up the good effort.
I really enjoy this banner and the simplicity in it. I think the background was a great choice and really gives the banner that hockey feel. The red glow in the middle was a nice touch too and adds a bit of colour. One thing I'd consider adding is all the VHL team logos in black-and-white just like the VHL logo along the bottom. I like the plain/simplistic look but just think it's missing a little something. I think the team logos would help.