Effort: 2/2 - I see effort
Look: 2.25/3 - Renders face seems to just disappear in a bowl of light, text is a bit too hard to find at first glance at the image and the font seems pretty scary, try using simple fonts. You did some solid work on the background, but it could use some more work as well.
Creativity: 1/1 - Yes
5.25/6