Sixersfan594

Falling Out From The VHLm Mag: The Sixersfan594 Story Earlier this summer, a returning member to the website had wanted to make a name for himself again and thus applied for a spot in the VHLm Magazine. After being hired for the job, Sixersfan's player -- Le'Sean Coutzen -- saw an enormous boost to his draft stock and rose up many draft boards of the top General Managers around the league. Sixersfan kept on writing, and wrote articles a week before they would be released to the public. He kept earning points for his player and the training hours kept rolling in, until a tragedy occurred. Sixers was casually walking across the street until out of nowhere, a car drove by him during the winter storm. That traumatized him for life, and he never wanted to go inside again. Many people would assume that if a person were to have almost have been run-over they would have wanted to stay inside and avoid the road, but this man loved the thrill that he had endured. Sixers rarely had time to go to his keyboard at home and type, thus he started to fall-out from his current job at the VHLm Magazine. He left many prospects out to dry and a campaign across the VHLm hockey world erupted denouncing him and demanding his resignation. Despite this criticism, Sixersfan kept writing, but not at the same pace as he had previously. Many of the prospects were outraged at his lack of effort in the articles since he had rarely any time to do the research necessary to entice the viewers. Often times he would write the articles and then go outside to avoid his keyboard and to ensure that he will not remember the horrific articles he had created. This created an even worse situation for this member, he avoided his so-called "failures" to find a certain happiness that could never be achieved. Him being unhappy led him into another rash decision, which was to become a VHLm General Manager for the Moscow Red Wolves. Sixersfan has just informed the head office that he is stepping down, and leaves behind a legacy of a team that was always the underdog, but always fought hard. Sixersfan came into the helm of the organization which lacked appeal to the fans with big name players, and always lacked sufficient assets. Sixersfan made his mark by stocking up for the Season 45 draft and gaining a goalie for the team's cup-run in the next season. Sixers, the now former Moscow General Manager wanted to leave the organization with this quote: I am very proud of the organization and its history. I came into an organization that lacked activity, but I was able to manage and create an organization where the locker room was active and welcoming. Sadly my fallout had taken away from the potential for what could have been accomplished, but I leave for my successor a ton of mobility and assets and a goalie suitable for a deep cup run. I expect to be allowed into the locker room as I please and I want to thank Eaglesfan for hiring me. Sixersfan's fallout with all things VHLm may seem like a red flag for his future as a VHL member, but there are only two options here. Focus and re-tool for his time in the VHL, or fade into inactivity like many prospects before him.

Game 5: Cologne Game 6: Cologne Game 7: N/A Game 5: Cologne 5-3 Leading Point Earner - Cote Leading penalty minutes - Hill Leading special teams goals - Miller

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Le'Sean Coutzen Forward Face offs won Points

Greg Zannon. Who's up now?

You suck ass anyways

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Meute Vikings Meute Express

4-3 Mute

Paul Gaustad

At least the games were close

Bou... Edit the OP

Let's get this going!

Wtf Higgins... I gave u money for this?

Ruutu, I'll gladly read yours and help you out since they often times make me chuckle.

I'll take the Blackhawks as a second team.

Grammatically the sentences did not contain good flow. The story was great, personally I loved it. Flow has to deal with fragments/run-on sentences as well as a lack of transitions.

5-2 Bratislava

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4-2 Stockholm

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Content 3/3 - Nice article. I think it's amazing how well Kyanon is doing as a defenseman. Also, wow the NA is so much better than the EU. Grammar 2/2 - Very good Appearance 1/1 - Good

Content 3/3 - I love the pbp type article here, and I really loved your coverage of this game. To be fair, I think D_A boosted our offense and that's why we are finally scoring. Also, I boosted Moscow's scoring since it helps my players with the achievement tracker. Grammar 2/2 - Pretty good leaders Oslo = leaders, Oslo (very picky - low weight) Appearance 1/1 - Yup Final 6/6

Content 3/3 - I liked the story and thought it was original. To be fair, I would've also made fun of the guy's hat lol Grammar 1.25/2 - I could've put another 5-6 more errors. The flow wasn't great and there were many sentence fragments I'm quite new fan = I'm a new fan/I'm quite a new fan Little while ago = A little while ago a open = an open on a live = with a live Never even dreamed = I have/had never dreamed Talkin = talking/talkin' (if you want it to sound like the original) what few = what a few mins = minutes on my hand = in my hand Could not get any words = I could not get any words that?. = that? Appearance 1/1 - Yup

Content 3/3 - Good article creating buzz on your prospects, they've got a great GM developing them. Grammar 2/2 - Yup with amazing vision = possessing amazing vision? It doesn't really sound right so I tried mixing it a bit. has shown = he has shown of time GM = of time, GM Appearance 1/1 - Nice