Content: 3/3- Nice article about McQueen's last few seasons trying to get a contract with the Seattle Bears. While it didn't work out in the end, atleast you found someone willing to pay you your money. Good luck with McQueen.
Grammar: 1/2- Lots of run on sentences, which means lots of missed puncuation. Run on sentences are easy to avoid with the use of a comma every so often. Maybe focus on pre-reading your stuff instead of arguing next time.
draft it = draft, it
draft they = draft, they
promising so = promising, so
but it = but, it
season so = season, so
teams = team
the league but = the league, but
prospect which is why he went higher in the draft but = prospect, which is why he went higher in the draft, but
time the = time, the
Appearance: 1/1- You got a picture and it looks pretty professional from my pov
Overall: 5/6