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Not a huge fan of this one sadly, I've seen some of your previous work and seen you improving but this one needs some help. The lighting is too dark, despite me getting where you were going with this. Also the font choice and style doesn't really work with the whole flow of things, just seems kinda slapped together. 

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On 1/1/2017 at 5:58 PM, brovy said:

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This falls an it short of the mark. Everything's all over the place, and not very cohesive. You clearly brightened his face, which is a good thing, but didn't provide a light source to explain that brightness. Most of the sig is very grungy, but the text is really futuristic. You've got some really good ideas , it just feels like you didn't fully commit to them. 

 

 

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