BluObieZ 1,125 Posted October 29, 2017 Share Posted October 29, 2017 (edited) INT-PRECINCT-DAY Don @Banackockand Lou @Tylerare drinking coffees as they stand in the kitchen of the precinct Don Something stinks about all this Lou Must be that fart I let go earlier. It’s called a lingerer Don No, a man is holding the highest office in the city and he has now to do the job. Mayor Toast was gunned down so they can put a dumbass in office. Why? I have no idea… Don sips his coffee Don But I intend to find out INT-STRIP CLUB-DAY King is getting a lap dance as he drinks straight from a bottle of rum. Mulligan @TheLastOlympian07 is standing nearby trying to hide Mulligan We shouldn’t be here King Why not? Mulligan We are on duty, these people are paying us King And I a generous officer of the law am putting money back in their pockets…panties Mulligan Shouldn’t we be doing something else? King Like what? Mulligan Figuring out who killed Mayor Toast? King I already know my dear Mulligan Mulligan Can you tell me? King Not how I operate my dear Mulli. I’ll let you in on the secret in due time Mulligan starts walking towards the door King Where are you going? Mulligan Getting out of here. Call me when you are done. This girls are way too young for me. Mulligan leaves the strip club. King smacks the ass of the stripper on his lap making her scream King He likes the oldies. The near “deadies” BLACK Theme Song KING AND MULLIGAN INT-MAYOR OFFICE-DAY Dom @Green is shoved into his office and the door is locked from the other side. Dom looks around the room not really sure he is supposed to do. He spots a kiddie desk across the room with a kiddie chair. He walks over to it and looks for a phone. He finds it under the desk and picks it up trying to call someone. But when he puts the phone to his ear all he hears is the Sesame Street Music on a loop. He falls into his kiddie chair. EXT-STREETS-DAY Mulligan is walking down the street. He finally has a smile on his face as he tries to do some real police work. He spots a kid crying because his ice cream fell, so he buys ice cream for him but the kid throws it at him because it’s the wrong flavour. He tries to help a old lady across the road but she hits him with her bag. He tries to join other cops for doughnuts and coffee but because he works with King they ignore him. Once he leaves the coffee shop he gets a J walking ticket. INT-PRECINCT-DAY Don walks into a dark room. He turns on a light which reveals the wall is covered in newspaper articles, and photos of people involved in crime across the city. He takes the picture of Mayor Toast down and put Dom up on tome the list. Nearby you can see the pictures of King and Fong. INT-DARK ALLY-DAY A car pulls into a dark ally and drives halfway down it stops as a man walks out of the shadows and brings an envelope up to the car. He hands it to Fong @tfongwho is sitting the back seat. Fong pulls up the window and looks into the envelope and smiles as he calls someone listed as “Pornstar” on his phone. Fong The Noodle is in the fryer EXT-STREETS-DAY Mulligan is walking down the street eating an ice cream with a big smile on his face as he enjoys it. His phone rings which stops him in his tracks. He looks to see who it is. It’s his fiancée Emily. Mulligan Hey babe Emily I need to tell you something Mulligan Okay… tell me Emily No, I need to do this in person Mulligan Is anything wrong? Emily Just meet me. This hard to do over the phone. Mulligan Okay. Where? Emily Park where we first met Mulligan Okay Emily Oh and no King Mulligan He’s preoccupied with… King things Emily Good, see you in twenty INT-PRECINCT-DAY Lou and Don are looking over files. Lou What exactly are we looking for? Don A reason Lou A reason for what? Don To fuck with King. This is all the paperwork for all the incidents, accidents and King things that has happened in the last year. In here lies a hidden truth. He must have slipped up somewhere. That’s where we pounce like a lion lying in wait Lou I don’t know… Sarge and even the Commissioner tried and failed. This man operates in a different world then we do. We need to let this go. Don You let go of your cock. You scared little boy. I am the man that will pin shit on this so called untouchable. Lou I’ll follow you, you know that. I just don’t understand where all this hate is coming from. Don He and I were supposed to be partners. Right out of the academy they wanted to pair us together. Well King didn’t want that. So he threw a shit fit. I see why now. Because I wouldn’t let him do the shit that he does. He needed a push over of a partner. In came Mulligan. Lou laughs Lou Mulligan was supposed to be my partner till King took him EXT-STREETS-DAY Mulligan is walking towards the park while on the phone with King Mulligan I don’t know what it can be. She wants to meet with me like right away Long Pause King Uh…mmmm… damn… she’s probably gonna dump your ass Mulligan How could you… King God damn Mulligan Should I call you back? King No, I just know women. I know how they think. I know how they act. This bitch… Mulligan Don’t call her a bitch King She’s about to break you Mulliheart. So yes she’s a bitch. She wants to meet you in public. Break your heart and move on. It’s clear as mud Mulligan Mud isn’t clear King Mulligan you just need to prepare youself. Like I am… I gotta go now. Trish is joining me… Cassidy, Holly… and Ryder Mulligan sits on bench thinking about what King just told him. He remembers all the good times he had with Emily. Doing stupid Mulligan things like Eating ice cream with her, walks in the park and just being with her. He sees that when he is with her he is the happiest. He also realizes that every good moment happens when King is not around. Which brings on memories of all the times Emily has been mad at him because of King. FLASHBACK EXT-AMUSEMENT PARK-DAY Mulligan and Emily are standing in line for a ride when out of nowhere King runs up and cuffs Emily to the railing, grabs Mulligan and begins running. Mulligan WHAT THE FUCK? King Being chased by asianic fucks. Saved your life. Oh and Emily will be fine. She may actually like the whole cuff thing. You can thank me late for that. INT-ROMANTIC RESTURAUNT-NIGHT Mulligan and Emily are sitting at a candle lit table just enjoying being together as they interlock arms and sip wine from each other’s glass. When loud noises can be heard from the kitchen. Shouting then screams then the sound of pots being banged against something. Mulligan sighs as he almost expects it. He gets up and walks to the kitchen to see King banging a pot over and over on the head of the chef. INT-HOUSE-MORNING Halloween night. The doorbell rings Emily opens it and a masked man stands in the door. He does not move or say anyting. She looks towards the living room at Mulligan who is watching Scream. As she turns to look back at the man. He’s gone. So she closes the door. Only to see he is now inside the house. The man screams “I’M GONNA RAPE YOU AND KILL YOU!” she screams and tries to run but is stopped by the laughter of the man who clearly is King. INT-HOUSE-MORNING Christmas morning at the Mulligan house. Mulligan has the whole Mulliclan over opening gifts as he warmly snuggles with Emily who is drinking hot coco by the fireplace. Momma Mulligan hands Mulligan a gift that only says it’s for him but not from who. Mulligan opens it to see that a bomb the timer says eight seconds. His eyes go wide and makes him throw Emily down and run out of the house yelling BOMB. Seconds later an explosion can be heard… Then laughing. He soon realizes it was a confetti bomb rigged to a speaker. The laughing was of King laughing. PRESENT DAY EXT-STREETS-DAY Mulligan who now realizes if he has any shot at saving what he has with Emily he needs to make a change. He needs to get away from the cancer that is King. As he gets up he spots Fong walking into “Sex Emporium” He sighs as he looks at his watch to see that he doesn’t have much time before he has to meet with Emily. But a King voice in his head says “See what the Asianic cock noodle is up to” So against his better judgement Mulligan cautiously walks across the road. INT-SEX EMPORIUM-DAY Fong is meeting with FRANCOIS GRANDE @Ahmaan ex pornstar turned Canadian Terrorist. Fong Noodle. Doodle. Drug. Grande Yes eh? De eh… drugs are in the dong eh? Fong Make giant noodle Grande Poutine! Er, uh… Very good I mean. We can profit off this noodle dong. It can help me carry out my plans Fong Noodle Grande Poutine Fong What is Poutine? Grande thinks for a second Grande Canadian Noodle Fong nods in acknowledgment as the bell of the door can be heard. Mulligan tries to look like an everyday customer as he tries to listen in. He heads over to the dildos without noticing. He picks up on and makes sounds like he is considering it meanwhile looking at Grande and Fong Grande Odd man Fong Partner fucked Grande Tabernac Fong Polinoodle Grande pulls out a gun and cocks it Fong No. Patti will noodle him Fong nods at a three hundred pound eighty year woman who walks over to Mulligan. Mulligan is caught off guard by her weight but likes he age. He tries to flirt with her. He does not even realize that he is now late for his meeting and his phone is ringing. After a few more moments the phone rings again Mulligan goes to look who it is which takes his attention off Patti who now grabs a giant dildo and begins to beat him over the head with it. Mulligan falls to the ground as he is getting cock smacked with it. As this all happens his phone rings again. We now see its Emily calling. EXT-PARK-DAY Emily is calling Mulligan. It goes to his answering machine “Hey you reached Mulligan I’m busy upholding the law with the best partner ever” King can be heard saying “Fuck off” in the message “leave a message and I’ll get back to you when I’m off duty” Beep. Emily That’s the problem. You are always caught up with that fuck! I can’t do this. I asked you to meet with me so I can tell you something. Something that should make us both happy. But now I am stuck her looking like a fool. Have fun with King. We will be at my mother’s if you care… Yes I said we! I’m pregnant with your baby you idiot” Fade to Black For Ko Kane Edited October 29, 2017 by BluObieZ Ahma and TheLastOlympian07 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastOlympian07 2,388 Posted October 30, 2017 Share Posted October 30, 2017 good stuff as always. I'll have to let my GF know shes pregnant fucking @tfong learn english still. always going on about noodles or some dumb shit. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482810 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator Baozi 1,664 Posted October 30, 2017 Moderator Share Posted October 30, 2017 I have a hankering for Canadian noodles now. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482813 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gudnason 607 Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 2 hours ago, tfong said: I have a hankering for Canadian noodles now. Wtf is that lol Canadian noodles Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482829 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BluObieZ 1,125 Posted October 31, 2017 Author Share Posted October 31, 2017 2 hours ago, Gudnason said: Wtf is that lol Canadian noodles Maybe read the article Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482875 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gudnason 607 Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 1 hour ago, BluObieZ said: Maybe read the article Maybe tailor your story for ESL people I have no idea what half of it is about lol Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482885 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahma 1,467 Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 you tagged me. I read the thing. I liked it! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482936 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BluObieZ 1,125 Posted October 31, 2017 Author Share Posted October 31, 2017 2 hours ago, Ahma said: you tagged me. I read the thing. I liked it! You were tagged cause you are that character Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-482945 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahma 1,467 Posted November 2, 2017 Share Posted November 2, 2017 On 31.10.2017 at 7:13 PM, BluObieZ said: You were tagged cause you are that character Awesome! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-483266 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DollarAndADream 3,357 Posted December 12, 2017 Share Posted December 12, 2017 Review: Late as fuck "review". Not that this technically needs a review considering people have read it and it's clearly at the word limit. One day I expect a video with real acting. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/45069-claimed-king-mulligan-s02e04-with-or-without-12/#findComment-489929 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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