boubabi 4,725 Posted June 15, 2020 Share Posted June 15, 2020 to finish my degree in 3d animation, I was part of this Cheers mediocrepony, gorlab, Mr_Hatter and 3 others 2 2 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Motzaburger 1,590 Posted June 15, 2020 Share Posted June 15, 2020 That's some sick stuff Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-755046 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gorlab 4,321 Posted June 15, 2020 Share Posted June 15, 2020 A R T Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-755136 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mediocrepony 1,216 Posted June 15, 2020 Share Posted June 15, 2020 Dang, Boubs Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-755207 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,026 Posted June 15, 2020 Commissioner Share Posted June 15, 2020 Leaving a comment so I don’t forget to watch this later. Years of Boubabi giving me GFX criticism so now with him in my world it’s my turn Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-755214 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted June 15, 2020 Author Share Posted June 15, 2020 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-755280 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted June 16, 2020 Author Share Posted June 16, 2020 On 6/15/2020 at 9:11 AM, Beketov said: Leaving a comment so I don’t forget to watch this later. Years of Boubabi giving me GFX criticism so now with him in my world it’s my turn Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-755956 Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic 504 Posted June 16, 2020 Share Posted June 16, 2020 This is great. I see the commercial for this school all the time in the metro and it makes me regret I didn't do something else with my life. Looking forward to seeing your other projects! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-756035 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,026 Posted June 16, 2020 Commissioner Share Posted June 16, 2020 Honestly not much to critique. Most of my complaints would be audio related. Some of the SFX just didn’t seem to line up well and the music to me just didn’t really fit the cut that well. Like it felt as if it should have built a lot more than it did. In general the pacing was a bit slow but I guess that was the point? Just kinda had nothing happening and then everything happening, would have liked to see things maybe building more tension. Like I loved the mist crawling up through the house, give me more of that tension building the whole time to get the creepy atmosphere going. Being picky there were a couple of shots that weren’t super blended. The phone dangling felt like it didn’t belong in the atmosphere for some reason to me and a few shots of the mist felt like it wasn’t clinging to surfaces as I’d expect. Overall though, very well done. Some scenes obviously looked better than others (the fish on the beach was A+, looked like live action aside from its eyes feeling weird) but nothing was truly bad. boubabi 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-756046 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire Tortorella 2,653 Posted June 16, 2020 Share Posted June 16, 2020 9 minutes ago, Beketov said: Honestly not much to critique. Most of my complaints would be audio related. Some of the SFX just didn’t seem to line up well and the music to me just didn’t really fit the cut that well. Like it felt as if it should have built a lot more than it did. In general the pacing was a bit slow but I guess that was the point? Just kinda had nothing happening and then everything happening, would have liked to see things maybe building more tension. Like I loved the mist crawling up through the house, give me more of that tension building the whole time to get the creepy atmosphere going. Being picky there were a couple of shots that weren’t super blended. The phone dangling felt like it didn’t belong in the atmosphere for some reason to me and a few shots of the mist felt like it wasn’t clinging to surfaces as I’d expect. Overall though, very well done. Some scenes obviously looked better than others (the fish on the beach was A+, looked like live action aside from its eyes feeling weird) but nothing was truly bad. 5/6 TPE Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-756051 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,026 Posted June 16, 2020 Commissioner Share Posted June 16, 2020 53 minutes ago, flyersfan1453 said: 5/6 TPE Nah, like 5.5, rounds up. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-756081 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted June 16, 2020 Author Share Posted June 16, 2020 3 months of work for 6 tpe. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-756134 Share on other sites More sharing options...
STZ 5,360 Posted June 17, 2020 Share Posted June 17, 2020 I'd buy that game Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/85416-another-short-film/#findComment-756191 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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