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  1. Anyone here playing Cities: Skylines? It's all I've been doing the past few days.
  2. love that clipping mask on the text of the last one
  3. I lost a lot of my old ones, but this is one of my earlier ones:
  4. Effort: 2/2 - As usual, great work. Look: 3/3 - Love the colouring, love the text, great sig. Creativity: 1/1 - Yessir. Total: 6/6 FInal: 6/6
  5. Effort: 2/2 - Absolutely, great work Look: 2.75/3 - Close to a 3/3 here. Text should stand out a bit more, the colour choice is a bit too dark. Great render work. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep. Total: 5.75/6 Final: 6/6
  6. Effort: 2/2 - Yeah you got it. Look: 2.5/3 - Cool lighting and stock work. Try to use Levels or Brightness/Contrast layers to make your render stand out more, he gets a little lost. I think the text is actually pretty sick, fits very well. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice stock work. Total: 5.5/6 Final: 6/6
  7. Effort: 2/2 - Keep up the good work. Look: 2.5/3 - Just looks like a bit more could be added, it feels like it's missing something. Try playing with stocks that add some "movement" to the sig. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep. Total: 5.5/6 Final: 6/6
  8. Effort: 2/2 - Yeah it's all there. Look: 2.75/3 - As bushito said, text needs work. Stock work is great though. Creativity: 1/1 - Yessir. Total: 5.75/6 Final: 6/6
  9. wasn't really anderson's fault...team fell apart in the third. 24 shots in that period alone. Glad he got the win though.
  10. Effort: 2/2 - I like seeing you try new stuff, keep it up. Look: 2.75/3 - Great subtle lighting and colouring, Not too sold on the shattered glass stock, the piece on the shoulder is a bit distracting. Other than that nice work. Creativity: 1/1 - Yessir. Total: 5.75/6
  11. Effort: 2/2 - Yep, it's all there. Look: 2.5/3 - Not your best in my opinion. Main thing holding this one back is the text. I would've stuck with something simple like Times New Roman in white, all caps and around 14px. Nice lighting and colouring overall though. Creativity: 1/1 - Yee. Total: 5.5/6
  12. Effort: 2/2 - Keep at it. Look: 1.75/3 - The text is very distracting here...try to make it much smaller and without a giant black background. Stick to simple fonts, and find some inspiration here: http://www.vhlforum.com/index.php?/topic/2501-jacks-guide-to-making-not-shitty-sigs/. Stock work is pretty cool. Try to make your render a bit bigger so he doesn't get lost in the sig. Also make sure you use high quality pictures so they're nice and sharp. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep. Total: 4.75/6
  13. Effort: 2/2 - Absolutely. Look: 2.75/3 - Nice stock work and lovin' the pink. Only thing holding this back for me is the text. I would've used something really simple...size 14 Arial in all caps maybe. Good work overall though. Creativity: 1/1 - Pink. Total: 5.75/6
  14. Effort: 1.75/2 - You're capable of much better in my opinion. Look: 2.5/3 - Nice colouring...but lighting and stock work do not really hold up here. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 5.25/6 Final: 5/6
  15. Effort: 2/2 - For sure. Look: 2.75/3 - Could use a gradient map on Hue/Saturation to bring the whole thing together colouring-wise. Nice stock work and lighting. Great text. Creativity: 1/1 - Yessum. Total: 5.75/6 Final: 6/6
  16. Effort: 1.75/2 - Hard to justify docking you much more than this, graphics are very difficult when starting, let me know if you need any advice or criticism before submitting in the future. Look: 2.25/3 - Text definitely could use work. Try to use a font like Arial, Helvetica or Roboto to keep it simple and clean. I like the colouring. Render kind of gets lost in the background, could use some lighting and blurring to draw him out more. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah. Total: 5/6 Final: 5/6
  17. Effort: 2/2 - Definitely! Nice work. Look: 2.5/3 - Great stock and render work. As IR mentioned, text is the main point of weakness here. Try to use stock on top of the text to help blend it in with the sig. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice work. Total: 5.5/6 FInal: 6/6
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