1. Expected higher!
2. I already left
3. No idea
4. Yes.
5. https://www.allrecipes.com/recipe/70394/grilled-cheese-and-peanut-butter-sandwich/
6. Pengu for sure I'm not even on the first line
1. You're irreplaceable
2. I'm sure he'll get the job done!
3. Hopefully!
4. Our locker room is pretty chill
5. I think so, starting to get a lot of player recognitions
6. Probably!
1. Adamant, and helpful!
2. I have no problems!
3. Yes, clone me twice and give me my own line lol
4. So far not much has changed but we did have a good last sim!
5. Most Helpful?
6. 2+ PPG!
Renders, effects, composition, colouring. All bold and amazing! The only weak parts would be the text but I wouldn't even know how you could do anything different. 9.5/10!
I like how much more you did with this one than your current. The concept is there but the composition is a little off. Text should be more readable, and it's hard to find a focal point because the text and the brand are both the same size. But I do like the smoke, and colouring with the lighting. Try adding texture in your backgrounds! 6/10
1. Yes! Especially with my own performance it's been quite a jump!
2. Absolutely great! Don't want to lose my core gameplay fundamentals though.
3. There's never enough ice time, I'd never be satisfied unless I can play back to back game on the same day.
4. Yes!
5. Sure!
6. I think our Coach and AC have been super helpful!
Composition is great because of the story telling. I think your next steps should be trying to unify the elements through colour, value and lighting. Also some text work could be beneficial! Overall for your second signature I think you're heading into the right direction. Solid 5/10!