Tylar

Content: 3/3 - Congrats on getting drafted to Helsinki with me :3. Hope you become a great lil player Grammar: 2/2 - Actually didn't catch anything. Appearance: 1/1 - looks pretty Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Nice little media on your players new spot. You picked a good spot.Good luck this season! Grammar: 2/2 - The issues were in the quotes which makes them irrelevant. Appearance: 1/1 - Nice Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Always a good read. A nice write up on past draft. Looked like a solid draft class. Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't catch anything Appearance: 1/1 - Looks lovely Overall: 6/6

Overview: 2/2 - Great rookie profile! Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Yup, the attitude one is pretty accurate Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't Catch anything Presentation: 1/1 - Looks pretty Overall: 8/8

Saskatoon claims Kane Hamilton

Overview: 2/2 - Did everything that was asked. Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Yes. Grammar: 2/2 - A few minor things. I don't think it was necessary enough to take off a point. abilty = ability off of there game = off of their game what ever = whatever (one word - Quite a few examples of this in your RP) a man child does will take your head clear off with noremorse = a man child that will take you head off with no remorse (I think this is what you meant) is not a instigator = is not an instigator Presentation: 1/1 -It looks fine. Overall: 8/8

I think I intentionally made it world wind

Brody Hodgson's World Wind Experience These last few weeks have been a world wind for Brody Hodgson. The former Helsinki Titan was busy preparing his client Marcel Faux for the VHL Entry Draft and was also selected to become the general manager for Team Canada for the S43 World Cup of Hockey. A week before that Brody Hodgson was named the General Manager of the VHLM’s Saskatoon Wild. Brody Hodgson being introduced as Saskatoon Wild GM “Everything kind of happened at once. I was preparing Marcel for the draft and then I got the call for the Saskatoon Job. I’ve always wanted to move into the management part of the business and I’ve been waiting to see if it would happen. So I gladly accepted that job then I also got the job to manage Team Canada at the World Cup. Which obviously did not go as planned. I was very disappointed with how that experience ended. Maybe I’ll try it again in the future. I’ve been very busy trying to juggle all these jobs and I think I’ve done a good job thus far. But now it is time to move on and focus on my VHLM team. I am really excited to be a general manager in the VHLM.” His client Marcel Faux ended up going third overall to the Helsinki Titans, Hodgson’s former stomping ground. Although Faux will not play in Helsinki this season as he got sent back to the VHLM due to Helsinki not wanting Faux to play for their not so great team. Hodgson’s highest profile client will likely make a major impact on the VHL next season with Helsinki having a bundle of picks in a very strong S45 draft. “I was absolutely thrilled to see Marcel land in Helsinki. I was secretly hoping he would go there but there was a lot of uncertainty about who Helsinki was picking. Although Helsinki is not very good right now, I know they’ll be great very soon. They have a boat load of picks next season in a very strong draft. They could possibly be a playoff team next season. They also have Koponen coming up as well who will likely be Faux’s line mate. Helsinki will always have a special place in my heart and I’ll be thrilled to have any of my future clients to go there. I’m looking forward to seeing how he performs there next season.” Faux taking a picture in his new Helsinki jersey after being drafted Now Brody Hodgson is Faux’s general manager as he is a part of the Saskatoon Wild after being sent down from Helsinki. This is Hodgson’s first major general manager experience in the league and it’s been going well so far. Hodgson has been around for about 16 seasons in the VHL circles and this is his first major opportunity in the VHL. “It’s gone really well so far. I think I have put together a strong team and a strong group of individuals. I made a few moves to make us even more competitive and try and win this season. I was thrilled to trade for Marcel as he is a great player and a great locker room presence. The season just started but it looks good so far. My team is preforming and getting results.” Now that Faux is VHL property, Hodgson can focus on his general manager abilities while checking in on his star client once in a while. Hodgson is going to stop taking clients for a few years to focus on being a general manager.

yay !

Good game team!!!!!

Overview: 2/2 - Good luck with your new player and welcome back! Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Solid. Grammar: 2/2 - I didn't catch anything. Presentation: 1/1 - Looks good Overall:8/8

Overview: 2/2 - Good rookie profile! Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Great Grammar: 2/2 - Nothing really. Only a couple things. happen when your a young goaltender = happen when you're a young goaltender (I think this is better but could be just me) Weinstein has great position and = Weinstein has great positioning and Presentation: 1/1 - Yup, Looks good. Overall: 8/8

Express Meute Dynamo Vikings

4-0 Toronto

Overview: 2/2 - Yup. Everything looks good and this was a good rookie profile. Good job and Good luck with your player!!! Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Did exactly what is asked of you on the rubric. Good job! Grammar: 2/2 - Pretty good the fastest skaters as the league = the fastest skaters in the league (pretty sure that's what you meant) powerplay = power play (pretty sure its two words not one) Presentation: 1/1 - Looks good. Overall: 8/8

Content: 3/3 - Pretty much knew you were going to go third or fourth so not surprised. Riga got a good one! Good luck! Grammar: 2/2 - Pretty good. Nothing major just minor things that read a bit better. team such as Riga Reign. = team such as the Riga Reign. good players in the team right now = good players on the team right now Appearance: 1/1 - Looks fine. Overall: 6/6

Bratislava Saskatoon Oslo

4 -2 Ottawa

Even the pre-season games too wtf. Higgins got some UFC setting on or something

ssk c1 is a beast. even tho he not even on lines.

Overview: 2/2 - You did a great job on this. Like how you made it into a HFBoards type profile. Nice idea. Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Fantastic. Exactly how it should be done. Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't catch anything. Presentation: 1/1 - Looks great! Might steal it for my next player in 7 seasons. Overall: 8/8

Content: 3/3 - Another interesting media spot by you. All the goalies coming up does create an interesting scenario for the S45 draft. I never thought of the possibility of GM's re-creating again if the draft falls their way. Could be interesting. I think your analysis is pretty spot on though. Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't catch anything Appearance: 1/1 - Looks great. Overall: 6/6

Overview: 2/2 - You did a good job on this part. Pros & Cons: 1.25/3 - The Pro's and Con's section is the major part of the rookie profile. While you named 3 of each, you did not go in-depth on each of them which is basically the whole part of the profile. This section is usually supposed to be around 300-400 words like the rubric suggests and yours was under 200 and was not in depth. Grammar: 2/2 - Caledon Ontario = Caledon, Ontario an an = an (typo) ! he = ! He (Theres a few examples of missed capitalization to start a sentence) causes him to loose = causes him to lose Presentation: 1/1 -Yes. Overall: 6.25/8

Content: 3/3 - Not sure what exactly I just read but it was quite entertaining, nicely done on the entertainment factor. Grammar: 2/2 - Most of it was in quotations so they're irrelevant. bittersweetness = bitter sweetness (pretty sure thats not one word) Appearance: 1/1 - I think you would've been better off centering it, but that's just me. It looks looks decent. Overall: 6/6

Higgins hates you imo