Tylar

good trade. gorlab is a raging lunatic

Saskatoon uses our waiver priority to sign Willcox sorry banana. ill do u favours in the future if this stays if not then ill still do u a favor in future<3

jamie so talented

Content: 3/3 - Good lil interview Glad to see you having success as such a young goalie. I haven't really followed the VHL much this season but hope you continue to do well! Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't catch anything else Campbell wa sa young = Campbell was a young (dat typo) back up = backup (pretty sure its one word) Appearance:1/1 - Looks lovely Overall: 6/6

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Content: 3/3 - Hopefully you continue to be active and become a great player! Looking forward to reading more media spots from you Good luck! Grammar: 2/2 - I didn't really catch anything. A couple things that would normal need a "and" in there, but it was your player talking. Appearance: 1/1 - Looks very nice. Overall: 6/6

Overview: 2/2 - Solid rookie profile, good luck with your player! Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Yup hit this part. Leadership was an interesting choice as a con. Don't see it very often. Grammar: 2/2 - I didn't know aloof was even a word, tbh. I had to google it, haha. and loves = and loves (an extra space ) Presentation: 1/1 - Yup Overall: 8/8

Content: 3/3 -Good duo. You're a great VHLM player. Looking forward to watching you dominate except against Saskatoon, then you can do nothing Grammar: 2/2 - I didn't catch anything. Great work! Appearance: 1/1 - Looks great Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Interesting.. I wasn't quite expecting for it to be literally cherry picking when I opened this. Grammar: 2/2 - Your obsession with the space bar is concerning. Stop touching it so much Various examples of extra space bar when using a comma; Ex: me , i = I Appearance: 1/1 - nice picture Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - Congrats on your first VHLM point! Oslo vs Saskatoon is definitely a great matchup! Hopefully Saskatoon comes out on the winning side for the rest of them Grammar: 2/2 - seats in the stand as = seats in the stands as these two great teams I'm sure = these two great teams, I'm sure when this came comes = when this game comes (I'm pretty sure) Appearance: 1/1 - Yup Overall: 6/6

good job team!

Content: 3/3 - Interesting as per usual. I Like to see what you come up with each week . Grammar: 2/2 - Didn't catch anything Appearance: 1/1 - Looks lovely as always. Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 -Interesting... Good luck with your player Grammar: 2/2 - south africa = South Africa Absoulutly = Absolutely hekps = helps (??) inorrect = incorrect (??) Appearance: 1/1 - I'll give it to you this time, but just so you know, in the future someone might take away a .5 or something. Could use a picture and bolding to make it look nice. Overall: 6/6

Molholt gone beast mode

Overview: 2/2 - Great rookie profile Pros & Cons: 3/3 - yes sir. Were very lovely. Grammar: 2/2 - . He = . He (extra spacebar ) Presentation: /1 - pretty. Love the player card! Overall: 8/8

Americans Meute Vikings Wranglers

4-0 Bears

saskatoon free claims henderson

Overview: 5/5 - You hit the criteria for the biography. Good job! Good luck with your player. You look like you could be a good player/member ! Grammar: 3/3 - I would say your grammar is pretty good... But your sentence(s) structure/short sentences are a bit odd/annoying. I'd suggest trying to work on that to make it a better read (Because some people might deduct marks for this in the future, just so your aware). Try getting someone on your team to maybe proof read? That works as well. I used to do that when I first started. (I hope you don't take this in a bad way, I'm just trying to help you/give you some guidance. ) he was a astounding = he was astounding a kid in = A kid in opportunity's = opportunities Presentation: 1/1 - yup Over 1000 Words? 1/1 - Just Barely Overall: 10/10

miracles do happen

Overview: 2/2 - Decent rookie profile. Some of your sentences were kind of repetitive to me but its not really a big deal like saying the same thing but in a different way. Pros & Cons: 3/3 - You definitely hit the word count portion. It was fine. You chose different ones than most people choose but thats fine... Grammar: 2/2 - some typo's and little things.. Don't think its enough to take off a point. Great manures = Great manners (??Not sure if this is what you meant.... Manure is like animal shit so..) dis leading = misleading (??? pretty sure that's what you meant) every hour, every minute. = every hour and every minute. Other then that = Other than that const = cost (pretty sure that's what you meant) Presentation: 1/1 - It's fine. Overall: 8/8

lmao wow. Poor Weinstein -- Ariel Weinstein (SSK), 3 saves from 5 shots - (0.600)

Content: 3/3 - Congrats on great career! Shutkowski was a great goalie, I'm sorry I couldn't win you the S43 World Cup . Glad to see you back with a new player that'll probably be a beast. Grammar: 2/2 - Nothing Appearance: 1/1 - Looks Great Overall: 6/6

Content: 3/3 - I hate geese, so I approve of the geese bombing. Interesting story telling... Nice little off-season you had.. Fairly entertaining. Grammar: 2/2 - Nothing really. molotov = Molotov there. he then = there. He then Appearance: 1/1 - Nice. Overall: 6/6