Overview: 5/5 - great article, really hit all the points, I like that Cole is a real hard worker in the gym. Though if I were you, I wouldn't stick around Kendall very long. I mean, look what they did to Lamar Odom!
Grammar: 3/3 - only thing I saw that was wrong was that in the beginning you unnecessarily capitalized mother and father. Other than that, great job
Presentation: 1/1 - good use of pictures, easy to follow formatting. Flawless victory!
Over 1000 Words? 1/1 1028 words
Overall: 10/10