FacePuncher

Why are you a porridge GM?

Good win by D-Money to improve to 2-1 on his career, and undefeated in the VWF! Like my girlfriend says, it's not about finishing quick, it's about finishing strong. I would like to point out though that when the ref indicated that I won, he totally just pointed at my bulge

D-Money is getting anxious for a fight!

Davos Titans Americans Vikings

4-2 Vikings

Overview: 2/2 - A little weak, but you have the age and height and stuff, and theres not much to write about if you haven't played any games yet. What you have looks good Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Nice work, very well thought out. I like how you made some of your cons based on your players personality rather than his stats, makes it very creative and interesting Grammar: 2/2 - looks good, only thing i saw is in the first pro i saw a casual switch from 3rd to 1st person, be careful about that Presentation: 1/1 - All good here, picture looks like what I would imagine a person name Titan Kronos would look like haha Overall: 8/8

i like making puns personally. my players last name means gift, so i get to say how lucky the league is to have me

Overview: 2/2 - "Basic information such as your players age, height, weight, hometown, etc" is all included. Nice job telling us about your stats, and I like how you called out Dadonov as a rival Pros & Cons: 3/3 - Good pros-cons, meets the word requirement, I like the use your "Agency" as a pro, and overall using many pros and cons that aren't just based on attributes, very creative Grammar: 2/2 - I'm pretty sure un-deniable doesn't have a hyphen. Thats all i could find Presentation: 1/1 -Pictures, good format, its all there 766 words

Feedback Very cool article, must be a very talented player to make such a seamless transition from football to hockey. Not sure what kind of players yours will be, but with a name like Kronos and a past in football, I'm assuming I don't want to be checked by him. I don't see any grammar mistakes, good job. I hope that more media spots about him are to follow! 503 words

When can I make my kickass article for the Young Stars game? I needs the roster!

I wish you didn't! Lol

What is this????

What is this???????

St. Petersburg, Russia. You can play the game outside in Palace Square!

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I'm loving this ASG!

Big win for the Sask boys!

Young stars game, I think it would be cool for it to be VHL Prospects vs. VHLM All-Stars

Well that was fun!

I would love to!

That's sad....I would love more VHLM articles

Yay, I guess

AVB is a brick wall....outshot the opponent by 6 and still can't get the W