Content: 3/3
736 words. STHS Version 2 is what we use in SHL, and I have loved it so far, from the GM aspect, as well, the player aspect. It can also be random at times, but usually it is good. VHL using Version 1 is fine, I think they should keep it that way since it works.
Grammar: 2/2
linemates = line mates
Appearance: 1/1
Good!
FINAL: 6/6