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Overview :3/3 Wow, this was phenomenally written, and wow, just blew me away! Like the incorporation of your junior days, since you are a veteran player. 1336 words.Perfect. Grammar: 2/2 Nothing Presentation: 1/1 Colours and pictures! Pros: 2/2 Cons: 2/2 FINAL: 10/10

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What about VHLM?

Content: 3/3 What a very informative article! If I had a goalie here, he would probably be an elite one just like in SHL, but I don't have one . 3408 words of amazement. Grammar: .5/10 favoured = favored kickstart = kick start netminder = net minder defenceman = defenseman immortalised = immortalized the extend = the extent tradtion = tradition moreso = more so emphasis = emphasize honours = honors Appearance: 1/1 Looks nice! Grade: 5.5/6

Content: 3/3 Very interesting idea presented here. Other than have the cards displayed in our profiles, could we trade/buy/sell these trading cards? Maybe open a pack of trading cards and create a HUT type scenario here! 687 words. Grammar: 2/2 woud = would dropbox = drop box Appearance: 1/1 sub headings, plus some pictures, nicely done! Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 Interesting media spot, would love to see more of this intergration between the two leagues! 460 words is just enough! Grammar: 2/2 himself = he Appearance: 1/1 Picture and a title nice! FINAL: 6/6

Since entering the VHLM in S38 with the Brampton Blades, Jarome Iginla has never seen any other game action other than in the VHLM. This season will fair the same for the Wild top send down, as he, along with others, will lead the Saskatoon Wild into S40 of the VHLM. The season 40 VHLM season is almost here, and we caught up with the newly figured Jarome Iginla to follow him around for a day, and see what the youngster does to prepare for the upcoming season. Jarome goes to bed promptly every single night at 10:42 PM. This enables him to play on his phone or iPad for 18 minutes until 11 PM. Jarome then sets his alarm for 7 AM and writes down some notes in a book beside his bed, which looks to be like his diary. He then wakes up at 7 AM after a perfect 8 hours of sleep and gets started with his day. He starts off with a nice bowl of fruit loops, sometimes like today he needs to eat more than one bowl. He then sleeps it all off and wakes up at promptly 3 PM where he drives down to the arena while drinking some Molson Canadian. He arrives at the arena and he gets pulled over for DUI and he is arrested for the night. We were not allowed in the jail so this is where we end. Too bad. #FreeJarome

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“The clock slowly winds down and that will be it! The Saskatoon Wild are defeated in seven games by the Ottawa Lynx! What a series! Come from behind win for the Lynx” Those were the last words Jarome Iginla heard of from last season. The 20 year old sophomore playing for the Saskatoon Wild just came off his first season with the Wild, and they were one game away from playing for the cup. A feeling Jarome will probably never get out of his body, as he felt decimated and felt the loss was at his fault. Coming into S39 Jarome Iginla was not exactly a touted player for the Saskatoon Wild. Being picked 29th overall in the VHLM Dispersal draft that season, GMs Brett Slobovidian and Mason Richardson both had Jarome playing minimal minutes for the opening half of the season. As the season progressed on, Jarome struggled, he had only mustered 4 points in the first 32 games of the season, and he was basically playing like he was drunk every single night. Lucky for him, the Saskatoon Wild had other players to rely on such as Rami Jakobssen and Mason Richardson, as both had tremendous seasons for the Saskatoon Wild. Around the 40 game mark, Jarome finally felt that he wanted to be a part of his team’s success this season, and he wants to contribute more than 2 minutes a game to the team. With that said, Jarome headed on over to the Wild training facility for the first time this season and worked out with the team. In the first few days Jarome got in considerably better shape, and that went noticed with the GMs as they moved Jarome up to the 2nd line for the 41st game of the season. Jarome continued to play on the second line for the Wild, and he started to produce just like he wanted to, as at the 65 game mark of the season, Jarome had already put up 38 points, 34 points in 24 games is amazing, and Jarome knew it was. As the season winded down, Jarome slacked a bit on his training as his daily visits to the training facility soon became weekly visits. His production still stayed up as he scored another 4 points in the final 7 games of the season, but his work ethic just declined, it went back to the way it was at around the 30 game mark. Playoff time came around and Jarome was ecstatic to actually be playing top minutes in the playoffs. He started to make his weekly visits to the training facility daily, and his scoring went back up, as in the first round of the playoffs, Jarome had 8 points with the Wild, which had put him in 5th place for scoring leaders at the time. He was ultimately unstoppable for the Wild in this series, and both the GMs and teammates were very impressed with his effort. When round 2 came around, it was like Jarome was a shadow on the ice. He barely ever touched the puck, whenever he was on the ice he would be away from the action, and he was shut down by the Lynx defenders on any opportunity he could get, but lucky for Jarome, with the Lynx set on him, they left gaps for other players such as Mason Richardson and Rami Jakobssen to come in and pot in goals for the Wild. The Wild eventually went up 3-0 in the series and it was going all good until game 4. In game four the Lynx laid back on Jarome and let him skate into the zone and do whatever he wanted to do, he even potted 2 goals and an assist in game four, however, the Lynx shut down the other scorers like Jakobssen and Richardson making them not a threat anymore. With most of their top players being shut down night after night, the Wild ended up choking the 3-0 series lead and were eliminated 4-3. All in all, this was a mediocre season for Jarome Iginla, but he hopes that his production will keep up this season, and he will be back to that point per game player we saw in the middle portion of S39.

I voted for Slobo but then he retired so Draper is good enough <3

Content: 5/5 Strengths and Weaknesses are great! You added a picture and a title. Grammar: 1/1 well respected = well-respected do you = you no no no = no, no, no. Appearance: 1/1 Over 500 words?: 1/1 545 words. Final: 8/8

Content: 5/5 It started off as somewhat a biography, but we got into the strengths and weaknesses and it looked very nice! Grammar: 1/1 Lbs = Lbs. a = an wont = won't wanna = want to isnt = isn't its = it's Couple of errors. Appearance: 1/1 Looks good! Over 500 words?: 1/1 675 words Final: 8/8

Content: 1/5 Vaguely talks about your players strengths or weaknesses AT ALL! More of a Media Spot than a Rookie Profile. Grammar: 1/1 puck = pucks Appearance: 1/1 Looks good. Over 500 words?: 1/1 514 words. Final: 4/8

Content: 5/5 Looks pretty good! You covered some weaknesses and strengths of your player! Grammar: 0/1 ft = ft. lbs = lbs. pokecheck = poke check powerfull = powerful slapshot = slap shot powerplay = power play linemates = line mates goalscorer = goal scorer fucused = focused powerforward = power forward serios = serious Althought = Although enought = enough strenght = strength accelaration = acceleration ankward = awkward hadle = handle puckhandling = puck handling usefull = useful goalscoring = goal scoring potencional = potential weakneses = weaknesses so = as Especilly = Especially recognise = recognize my be = may be cheapshots = cheap shots Many words spelt incorrectly! Appearance: 1/1 The odd bolding in it makes it kinda weird, but will let it slide. Over 500 words?: 1/1 675 Final: 7/8

Content: 5/5 Amazing here, exactly what a Rookie Profile should be like! You never even went into the back story of your player and kept it all about his strengths and weaknesses! 514 words as well! Grammar: 1/1 lbs = lbs. Playstyle = Play style powerplay = power play (3 times) Appearance: 1/1 Title and picture present. Over 500 words?: 1/1 FINAL: 8/8

Content: 3/3 Good job with the back story! A football turned hockey player is not something I have ever seen. Grammar: 2/2 seeked = looked slapshot = slap shot Presentation: 1/1 Looks pretty good. Pros: 2/2 Three good pros, and just about 200 words. Cons: 1/2 Three good cons, but short of the 200 word mark. Final: 9/10

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Interesting. This King Czar III guy seems to be an interesting character

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Content: 3/3 Absolutely amazing work here. Never knew that it actually happened a year ago, thought it was some time ago. Nice to see the VHL survived that obstacle! 753 words of pure amazement. I was engaged the entire time, mainly because I am new Grammar: 2/2 written = Written anymore = any more its = it's Appearance: 1/1 Logo at the top makes it so much better. Final: 6/6

Content: 3/3 Nice look into the trades that Frank made. That Richardson deal might be good, but I don't have a vast knowledge of this league yet. Pretty historic I guess. 1154 words, very nice. Grammar: 2/2 S42 QUE 1st, S42 COL 1st, S42 QUE 3rd - S42 QUE 1st, S42 COL 1st, and S42 QUE 3rd Appearance: 1/1 Nice color and images! Final: 6/6 *2 = 12/12

Content: 3/3 Great idea! Pretty sure someone in Helsinki's Locker Room thought about doing this. Very neat to read. Would love to see something like best hitting seasons or something. 1689 words, good. Grammar: 2/2 centred - centered centre - center honourable - honorable analyse - analyze a - an Appearance: 1/1 Picture good, would like to see colors. Final: 6/6 x2 Historical = 12/12

Content: 3/3 Somewhat strayed off-topic in some parts of the MS, but it still flowed nicely and was a joy to read. 573 words, over the requirement. Tordahl seems to be a good player, he picked up quite a few awards the other night. Grammar: 2/2 The - the rumoured - rumored its - it's He's very respected and never really says anything negative. - He's very much respected, and never really says anything negative. Helsinki,Calgary - Helsinki, Calgary Minor errors. Appearance: 1/1 Looks pretty good. Maybe add some color. Final 6/6

Content: 3/3 Very cool. Would love to see more these historical articles speaking about past trades and stuff. Even for a regular media spot! Good job Winter! Grammar: 2/2 Lets - Let's mid first - mid-first self laughing - self-laughing approx - approx. Minor errors. Appearance: 1/1 Could add some color. Still looks nice. Final 12/12

what the fuck