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STLZACH

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  1. Effort: 2/2 - So much going on. The depth is outstanding. Look: 2.75/3 - I feel like the text is lacking. It might even be better without any text at all to be honest. You did really good shit with the lighting and the blurring on the render. The focal is clear, but it doesn't feel forced. Good job. Creativity: 1/1 - Its really hard to get things to look right with such consistent lighting. 5.75/6 --> 6/6
  2. Effort: 2/2 - Not much to it but I also think if you did anything differently it wouldn't have worked. Look: 3/3 - I have not one thing to say about this. Very nice job. Creativity: 1/1 - I feel like if I were to dock anywhere, it would be here, as this is a very tried and true style that you kind of see often, but its not worth it 6/6 --> 6/6
  3. Effort: 2/2 - Looks like a lot of time was spent getting placement correct and I'm assuming you did your own render as well. Look: 2.5/3 - Everything works together for sure, and it's nicely done, it is just really simple for me. I also think the text could have been a little better. Creativity: 1/1 - Yea 5.5/6 --> 6/6
  4. Effort: 2/2 - This is quite clear. I think you did very good stuff here. Look: 3/3 - I have only one complaint, and thats the random line above the text. Everything else is just great. Nicely done. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes. 6/6 --> 6/6
  5. Effort: 2/2 - You continue to improve every time you make something new. Look: 2/3 - I like most of what is going on here. It blends really well. Next time try blurring the background, I think it pulls away from the player as the focal point, particularly the bright ass jumbo-tron. I really dislike that font choice, but you did a much better job with placement and blending than you have in the past. I like where you are headed still so keep going. You'll be pushing 6's out like, next week. Creativity: 1/1 - Good enough for me! 5/6 --> 5/6
  6. Effort: 1.75/2 - Looks like a simple background, a render, some brushes with a layer clipping mask, and text. I count about 6 layers. I feel like I need more. Look: 2.5/3 - I think the displacement layer really throws everything off. There is just too much of it. I think if you dialed it back a bit and gave this some good lighting it would be a 6/6. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure, certainly not able to deduct here. 5.25/6
  7. Effort: 2/2 - I can clearly see lots of work done here. Look: 2.5/3 - I feel like the render got a little washed out so that really hurts the whole thing for me. As Frank said, it's a little bright, and I think the lightning is also a little misdirected. Lots of clashing flow. The text could be better as well. Overall, I'm nitpicking, as it is nicely done. Creativity: 1/1 - Seems like you have your own style. 5.5/6 --> 6/6
  8. THe layers you were going to paint black onto were any of gmap 1-2-3-4.
  9. On Gradient Map Layers, if you click the white box as if to select it, and then get a black soft circle brush, you can erase part of the gmap that way. This would get rid of the color on his face.
  10. Much better now that you have photoshop. Remember to hold shift when you're resizing, it maintains the proportions. Text is still giving you trouble but its better so keep thinking about that. And the coloring is decent but your render looks like he's about to do the Bruce Banner.
  11. FUCK dude what did your username used to be? I smoke a lot of weed my memory is awful. I remember Vase and Berger but I can't remember your username
  12. Id like to hear some thoughts on this before it gets submitted tomorrow
  13. Yes this is very good if you are just starting out and unsure of yourself. The text needs some work and your render placement is a little meh. Outside of that, keep doing it man.
  14. I used to be a grader, I'm a grader in the WFL right now (affiliate) and I want more points for my player. Zach Voss is the biggest snub for the HOF in the history of the world. How can you be the next legend when you already are THE legend?
  15. I got high and forgot Maybe I'll just drop in and say hi every couple months when I remember you guys.
  16. Would definitely play some league with the old vhl guys... My IGN is Bleunote add me and well play
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