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  1. jeez boubs, only 5 points. get it together
  2. there are 2 threads for dis
  3. I think I joined when you were still active here but I wasn't really active then. Anyway, welcome back!
  4. Effort: 2/2 - Enough done here, but far from your best in my opinion. Look: 2.5/3 - The lack of contrast on the render beside the high-contrast in the background kind of throws this off, as well as the high-contrast look of the text. Good composition and flow though. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool colouring and nice aesthetic. Total: 5.5/6
  5. Effort: 2/2 - Stock work and lighting are both great. Look: 2.75/3 - As I said, love the stock work and lighting. Text isn't the best but doesn't really take away from the look so that's good. Nice overall. Creativity: 1/1 - Unique look, and good execution. Total: 5.75/6
  6. Effort: 2/2 - You're capable of more in my opinion but it looks like some decent effort was put into this. Look: 2.5/3 - Not really a fan of this. The style of the render doesn't really fit with the digital style of the font and stock work. I think this would've been much better if the text was a small sans-serif on the side of the render. Creativity: 1/1 - Definitely creative. Total: 5.5/6
  7. Effort: 2/2 - High standards to call this 'meh', A lot done here, and it's done well. Look: 3/3 - Excellent stock work, great colouring. Only complaint is that the text is a bit small for my taste. Not worth a dock though. Creativity: 1/1 - Very unique styling, great c4d usage. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  8. Effort: 2/2 - I can see that you put in enough here. Look: 2/3 - Really not a fan of this to be honest. Bright is okay but to me this is a bit overdone in that regard. Try to avoid Color Dodge, as it blows out details. I recommend downloading some .PSDs from the Resources section to see what other people are doing in sigs that you like. Other than that, I strongly encourage you to post sigs in the graphics forum for feedback from more members. In regards to this sig specifically, I think you should try to avoid using special fonts, and stick to things like Arial, or grab Roboto from online. Keep the text simple, and a bit smaller. Also have the text right above your render in the layers, that way the stocks will blend in the text as well. Creativity: 1/1 - You've got nice style. Total: 5/6
  9. Effort: 2/2 - Yes sir. Look: 2.75/3 - Very close to a 3. Render and text is great, but the bg doesn't quite complement the rest very well. As well as that, the right side feels a bit empty, if the render and text were shifted over a bit it would have helped. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice colouring. Total: 5.75/6
  10. Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, jersey change, etc. You got it. Look: 2.75/3 - Stock work is very good. Main dislike is the text. Could be pulled in a bit over the render, and maybe add a background to it, or duplicate it and shift it over so it's easier to read.Lighting could be better, even just a layer on Soft Light dark around the outside and bright in the middle. Good work overall though. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool shit, keep it up. Total: 5.75/6
  11. Effort: 2/2 - Easily. Look: 3/3 - Insane. Only complaint is the darkness of the text on the left. Otherwise fire. Creativity: 1/1 - Simply sick. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  12. Effort: 2/2 - Text, lighting, colouring. You nailed it. Look: 3/3 - Love this. rust has worn off quickly. Lighting is on point, minimalist texture work is great as well. No complaints. Creativity: 1/1 - Gorgeous. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  13. Effort: 2/2 - You got it! Look: 2.5/3 - Colouring is great, and stock work is pretty cool. Text works as well. Biggest issue is the contrast. Face looks burnt to me. Other than that, nice work. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice and bright, keep it up. Total: 5.5/6
  14. Effort: 2/2 - Sweet work with the animation. Look: 2.75/3 - Text is slightly hard to read, and not a huge fan of the font. Lens flare isn't in the greatest location. Apart from that, animation is sweet, and the overall aesthetic is very nice. Creativity: 1/1 - Absolutely. Total: 5.75/6
  15. Effort: 2/2 - Indubitably. Look: 2.75/3 - I'm rarely a fan of the duplicate render look and can't say I'm a huge fan here. Not really distracting but I find it doesn't really add much. I like the pixelized look, and also the text and lighting. Colouring is nice too. Creativity: 1/1 - Unique look. Total: 5.75/6
  16. Effort: 2/2 - I can see it! Look: 2.5/3 - The stock work is nice, but I find overall the sig is too dark, including the text. I really like the colouring but the darkness kind of hides the nice work. Creativity: 1/1 - Great concept, execution slightly lacking. Total: 5.5/6
  17. Effort: 2/2 - Absolutely, great work. Look: 3/3 - I like the minimalist stock work here. Good lighting and composition. Only complaint is the kerning/spacing on the text, kind of off-putting. Otherwise great. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeppers. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  18. Effort: 2/2 - Keep up the improvement! I like your style and progress. Look: 2.5/3 - Stock work is cool but the contrast is a bit too intense. I recommend checking out the thread I made a while back for some simple techniques that might help. http://www.vhlforum.com/index.php?/topic/2501-jacks-guide-to-making-not-shitty-sigs/ I like the composition, nice use of the render. Creativity: 1/1 - Creative text work and composition! Total: 5.5/6
  19. Effort: 2/2 - Lighting, text work, stock work, you got it. Look: 2.75/3 - Stock work is the high point here, otherwise it could use some improvement. Text is okay. Blending is good too. Nice work overall. Creativity: 1/1 - Cool stock work for sure. Total: 5.75/6
  20. still got another season with sixten
  21. dude, sick work. I'll take it
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