Effort: 2/2 - stock work, lots of effects, lighting etc
Look: 2.5/3 - really like this, but a few things are holdin' it back. contrast is a bit too high, and the focal is a bit lost with the equally bright bg. maybe desat'ing the bg a bit could've helped.
Creativity: 1/1 - hellz yeah
Total: 5.5/6