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  1. I'll grade this but someone else will have final say. Effort: 2/2 - lots done to every aspect here Look: 2.75/3 - only thing really hurting this is the text. Awkward positioning and the colour change isn't ideal. Very nice stock work. Creativity: 1/1 - many different concepts in this, great work Total: 5.75/6
  2. Effort: 2/2 - lots of stock work, text effort for sure as well Look: 2.5/3 - render loses a lot of it's focus with the bright text area and the white lines. If he was bigger it could have made up for that. nice bg work and text Creativity: 1/1 - very interesting bg Total: 5.5/6
  3. Effort: 2/2 - simple look but it looks like there was a good amount of effort into it Look: 2.75/3 - real nice. maybe could have tried something more with the render effects to compensate for the emptiness, but it's still great. Creativity: 1/1 - mmmhmmm Total: 5.75/6
  4. Effort: 2/2 - stock work, lots of effects, lighting etc Look: 2.5/3 - really like this, but a few things are holdin' it back. contrast is a bit too high, and the focal is a bit lost with the equally bright bg. maybe desat'ing the bg a bit could've helped. Creativity: 1/1 - hellz yeah Total: 5.5/6
  5. jack

    TUR/SSK; S35

    Okay I'll ask someone to add you to it.
  6. jack

    TUR/SSK; S35

    Accept. (I miss my goal light smiley things)
  7. Effort: 2/2 - stocks, text, lighting, it's all there Look: 2.5/3 - not feeling the contrast on this one, and colouring is kinda weak. Nice bg work and decent lighting. Creativity: 1/1 - definitely Total: 5.5/6
  8. Effort: 2/2 - Clear instructions, lots of steps, good tut. Look: 3/3 - Final result is on of my faves from you. Not much else to say, nice work. Creativity: 1/1 - it's a tut Total: 6/6
  9. Effort: 2/2 - could use a bit more stock work but not enough to dock Look: 2.25/3 - I like the text, well done there. BG effect is a bit off-putting, maybe more blur on the outsides. Also needs a bit more separating the main render from the faded one behind it. Creativity: 1/1 - yep, interesting idea with the bg Total: 5.25/6
  10. Effort: 2/2 - sweet work on the text, tons of bg and adjustments as well Look: 2.75/3 - text is the dopest. only thing hurting this is the lack of over render blending and the weird look of the logo. Creativity: 1/1 - dem polygons Total: 5.75/6
  11. Effort: 2/2 - as usual. keep it up Look: 2.75/3 - really like this actually. sick use of the reflection, decent text, nice stock work Creativity: 1/1 - sweet colour scheme Final: 6/6
  12. Effort: 2/2 - as usual you put a lot of work into these. keep it up, just try something entirely new next time Look: 2.25/3 - cool stock work, but contrast is too high and as sandro said it's too bright. try not to cover any of the face with text either Creativity: 1/1 - maybe try some new stuff with text though Final: 5/6
  13. Effort: 3/3 - yeah man, keep it up. huge improvements Look: 2.5/3 - other than the brightness, this is quite dope. if you want to keep the look of something but it's just too bright, make a new levels adjustment layer and drag the middle slider to the right Creativity: 1/1 - hunnid percent yee Total: 5.5/6
  14. Effort: 2/2 - stock, text, background etc all had considerable work done Look: 2.25/3 - text needs to be more prominent, hard to head atm. Splatters are nice but out of position, tighten them up to the render. Creativity: 1/1 - cool bg Final: 5/6
  15. damn dats dope
  16. what font is that? looks dope sweet retro look on this, kinda cheesy but it adds to it in this case
  17. little too bright but your stock work is really improving. keep it up mang
  18. Nothing in /r/hockey 's rules forbids advertising a site, so we're good on that front. If someone wants to write up a post I can submit it, since I have a fairly old reddit account that wouldn't be perceived as a link spammer.
  19. Very nice considering the rust. Brushing over the helmet is a little odd, and that bg text is meh. Nice work!
  20. sure thing
  21. V1 - V2 -
  22. effects are sick but render looks kinda weird. something with the noise
  23. mac/pc ?
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