Overview: 3/3 - Great history on Boychuk's career so far. Scouts had Boychuk pegged as a dedicated player, and he is churning out those practice hours each week in proof of his dedication. Keep up the good work and I'm sure you'll do great on Calgary
Grammar: 2/2 - A few silly mistakes
points for awhile = points for a while
and would not advanced = and would not advance
it's own = its own
can not = cannot
Presentation: 1/1 - Looks good.
Pros: 2/2 - Met sentence and word requirements. Looks like you are a playmaker
Cons: 2/2 - Met sentence and word requirements.
Overall: 10/10
Final: 10/10