Content 3/3 nice article,
Grammar 1.5/2 Dollar got most of it but not capitalizing I was a major problem, there was also quite a few commas after a few spaces on a word. EX) good ,
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Overall 5.5/6
Final6 6/6
Content 3/3 Nice article, and welcome back
Grammar 2/2 Dollar got everything
Appearance 0.75/1 Nice different font colors but like dollar said it needs some images.
Overall 5.75/6
Final 6/6
Overview 2/2 Yup, all the info's there
Pros & Cons 3/3 Great, good luck with Mosley notjt
Grammar 2/2 Not much to find
reminscient - reminiscent
Presentation 1/1 Looks good
Overall 8/8
Player Name: Souryuu Kaminogi
VHL Team HC Davis Dynamo
Cash you have: 3,000,000
Purchase Name Welfare Upgrade
Cost of Purchase 2,000,00
Cash Left 1,000,000
Content 2.25/3 - Ya like taron said the word count is to low but good article.
Grammar 2/2 Nothing to find
Appearance 1/1 looks good
Overall 5.25/6
Final 5/6
Overview 2/2 Yup, all the info needed was there
Pros & Cons 3/3 Great, look forward to seeing how a goon does.
Grammar 2/2 Not much to find
gonna - going to
Presentation 1/1 Looks good
Overall 8/8
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